I See Her
Tribute28 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
Yes, a well-written tribute, full of the blessings and glories of nature, with each nicely paired with the emotion it inspires. Excellent.
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Yes, a well-written tribute, full of the blessings and glories of nature, with each nicely paired with the emotion it inspires. Excellent.
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Thank you I really appreciate your review
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You are welcome. -- Mike
Comment from pmait
Sealord, this is a beautiful poem. Although I am not accustomed to odes in free verse, this shows me how well it can be done. Using the female pronoun tells me that you have in mind our fictional Mother Nature, and the ode says you love her, so I see this as a love song for this earth as we experience "her." I would have the first line say "I see her," and combine the rest with line 2, but I have given you six stars already, and you can't do better than that.
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Sealord, this is a beautiful poem. Although I am not accustomed to odes in free verse, this shows me how well it can be done. Using the female pronoun tells me that you have in mind our fictional Mother Nature, and the ode says you love her, so I see this as a love song for this earth as we experience "her." I would have the first line say "I see her," and combine the rest with line 2, but I have given you six stars already, and you can't do better than that.
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Thank you very much i appreciate your review
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Your Ode, is somewhat like a Psalms...
I enjoyed every word of the praise you have given for
creation. The moon, great beauty that leaves you in awe
and the stars, glittering like jewels and inspiring hope..
What lovely thoughts. And finally the night, rocks you to
sleep in her bosom. You have my last six and I am honored to
award it. :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Your Ode, is somewhat like a Psalms...
I enjoyed every word of the praise you have given for
creation. The moon, great beauty that leaves you in awe
and the stars, glittering like jewels and inspiring hope..
What lovely thoughts. And finally the night, rocks you to
sleep in her bosom. You have my last six and I am honored to
award it. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Thank you very much i appreciate your review
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine ode and tribute poem
to the one who protects,
the mother who rocks and comforts
Seen in all aspects of nature
that nourish, support and protect, giving hope
The one who is like the jewel in the darkness
that gives strength and joy
Excellent poetic imagery
Very well done
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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This is a fine ode and tribute poem
to the one who protects,
the mother who rocks and comforts
Seen in all aspects of nature
that nourish, support and protect, giving hope
The one who is like the jewel in the darkness
that gives strength and joy
Excellent poetic imagery
Very well done
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Thank you very much i appreciate your review
Comment from sage17611
This is a nice poem, I like the message about the protection of the clouds in your poem and in the author's notes. To be honest I have never really looked at the clouds as being a protective entity, an interesting message. Your poem is well written and imaginative, this is a nice read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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This is a nice poem, I like the message about the protection of the clouds in your poem and in the author's notes. To be honest I have never really looked at the clouds as being a protective entity, an interesting message. Your poem is well written and imaginative, this is a nice read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 07-May-2016
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Thank you very much i appreciate your review
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! Thank you for the author's notes. I enjoyed reading this poem.
The author's words are creative, deep and thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Excellent Poem! Thank you for the author's notes. I enjoyed reading this poem.
The author's words are creative, deep and thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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I appreciate you.Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
The clouds made the sun rays softer and instead of burning your skin it just warms you up. In the night moving in front of the moon for awesome moments.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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The clouds made the sun rays softer and instead of burning your skin it just warms you up. In the night moving in front of the moon for awesome moments.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you for pointing that out, I appreciate your review
Comment from GeraldS
This is a nicely penned tribute. I see it on two levels. It could be a child focusing on his/her mother. Or it could be an adult reflecting on the object of his love. Irregardless, a clever poem filled with sweet sentiment. Maybe an appropriate piece to be posted close to Mother's Day.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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This is a nicely penned tribute. I see it on two levels. It could be a child focusing on his/her mother. Or it could be an adult reflecting on the object of his love. Irregardless, a clever poem filled with sweet sentiment. Maybe an appropriate piece to be posted close to Mother's Day.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your heartfelt review
Comment from heyjude
This is a beautiful tribute and ode for the writing prompt.
I like how you say you see her in these different ways: in the
moon, with such great beauty that leaves me in awe.. the only
one I wondered about was In the clouds, that seals through the sky..
Should that have been steals through the sky?? Just wondered.
Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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This is a beautiful tribute and ode for the writing prompt.
I like how you say you see her in these different ways: in the
moon, with such great beauty that leaves me in awe.. the only
one I wondered about was In the clouds, that seals through the sky..
Should that have been steals through the sky?? Just wondered.
Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you for your heartfelt comment
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The cloud protects from sky luminance distribution reducing the intensity of light ,in this poem the clouds acts as a shield .In real life situation when we have protection ,it takes our fear away.
When the clouds seal the sky -it protects us from danger.
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Oh, I see.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
What a beautiful poem in honor of mothers AND on mother's day! Awesome contest entry and you have a great chance to win.
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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What a beautiful poem in honor of mothers AND on mother's day! Awesome contest entry and you have a great chance to win.
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
