Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - I think the sarcasm font showed loud and clear!

Which is, of course, the perfect tone for an arrogant blowhard's
monologue (snicker).

You've captured the stereotypical arrogant snob quite effectively :-)

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Well, it wasn't all that difficult - just had to be my normal ever sweet self ;-)

Thanks for the fun review.

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Wow! This is a really great way to portray an arrogant person! You actually mouthed the arrogant person, as is, brilliant! Plus, it is very funny, too! Excellent write! Tony bronk

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks for the kind review :)

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

It's so true...who ever writes thinks his poem is so good and why it didn't win. It's a matter of reader's taste and choice. Nice poem. Wish you all the best at the voting booth.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks for the kind review and good wishes :)

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is stunningly amazing as entry to my contest, thanks by the way, or even bu itself without competition. I even know who wrote it. Way to go.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

You do? I won't ask how, that would spoil the mystery. Thanks for sponsoring the contest, there are certainly some interesting and varied entries in there, and I'm guessing perhaps more than one grudge. It certainly is a topic that gets people thinking :)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I know what you mean, my friend. I have had a few experiences on here and my other site with poets and writers who think they know everything and their writing is so great. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thanks for the kind review, and for the good wishes, much appreciated :)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

hahahahahahahahaha -- I wish I could sign, seal and DELIVER this to a certain few SOMEONES on this site! hahahaha -- BRILLIANT! Good luck in the contest. I have a feeling you'll do well!!!!!

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Thanks for the lovely review and good wishes, Robyn :)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

This wonderful pantoum has terrific imagery and passion, and a smooth flow of words that makes for such an easy read. Fabulous. A masterpiece.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

LOL thank you LIJ ;-)

Comment from GeraldS

Exceptional

I don't know how well you'll fare in the contest, but this is a brilliantly written humor piece. I particularly like the middle line. You deserve a six just for that one line. I try to vote in as many contests as I can, and in order to do so I have to read all the entries. And I'll have to admit that sometimes what I read seems less than stellar.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

That's my favourite line too. Thanks for the lovely review and the wonderful rating :)

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Ooo sarcasm as a font would be brilliant! ha This reads quite robust and formidable- perfect for the acrostic entry to arrogance. I was almost offended as I read this. lol Well done!

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Oh no, please don't be put off. My PC doesn't have "offensive" font! Thanks for the kind remarks :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Hey I thought that's a good idea. I'll try it.

"Gotta run, it's been fun... hope your piece of crap won".

Fanstory replied:

"Please expand on this comment. Short reviews are not useful.

"For poems you can tell the author how you thought it flowed. If it rhymed, did the rhymes seem forced? Did the structure make sense? Did it draw on your emotions? Did it present strong images? Would you recommend it to someone else?

"Reviews are monitored. So take your time writing reviews."

Are they stupid? Anyone knows how a piece of crap flows. Was the rhyme forced? There were two lots of rhyme and I hgave already mentioned flow so it could hardly be forced now could it. There will that be long enough.

PS I thought it was quite good actually. But that would have been too short too.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Ha! I think it's a damn shame it wouldn't accept your original response! Thanks for the fun review :)