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Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Excellent poetic thought expressed in the most unique way. I appreciate your poem, helps us to understand where happiness springs from .Good job
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Excellent poetic thought expressed in the most unique way. I appreciate your poem, helps us to understand where happiness springs from .Good job
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reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you for the review. Teri
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely correct Teri, happiness is something that displayed on the outside is a sign of what's going on on the inside, or at least it, the darkness can't hold out out the light forever. Beautifully composed in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
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You're absolutely correct Teri, happiness is something that displayed on the outside is a sign of what's going on on the inside, or at least it, the darkness can't hold out out the light forever. Beautifully composed in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you Roy for the great review. Teri
