May blossoms
poem 3-5-322 total reviews
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Wonderful poem (3-5-3), real nice, and easy flow, and the picture is also an awesome match. All in all, a nice great contest entry. Good luck, and thank you again for a nice read. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Wonderful poem (3-5-3), real nice, and easy flow, and the picture is also an awesome match. All in all, a nice great contest entry. Good luck, and thank you again for a nice read. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Great review - thank you zanya
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Great poetry, and you are so welcome. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from Joan E.
Your 3-5-3 is quite vivid and reinforced by the artwork you selected. You even included an alliteration of "s's". Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Your 3-5-3 is quite vivid and reinforced by the artwork you selected. You even included an alliteration of "s's". Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 03-May-2016
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Much appreciated - thank you zanya
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Great - thanks for reading and the review zanya
Comment from kathleenspalding
Really nice classic haiku type three five three. Beautiful artwork and message. Very well written. I would recommend this poem to everyone. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Really nice classic haiku type three five three. Beautiful artwork and message. Very well written. I would recommend this poem to everyone. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Thank you for reading and the review zanya
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You're very welcome.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Great visual and smell imagery as well. It is perfect in form and every way.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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Great visual and smell imagery as well. It is perfect in form and every way.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 03-May-2016
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Thanks for reading and the review zanya
Comment from aprilkmcleish
Excellent 3/5/3 poem. May is my favorite month for this very reason (it's also my birthday month, that helps too).
I think you did a wonderful job bringing the reader's senses into this poem; smell, sight, touch. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-May-2016
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Excellent 3/5/3 poem. May is my favorite month for this very reason (it's also my birthday month, that helps too).
I think you did a wonderful job bringing the reader's senses into this poem; smell, sight, touch. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-May-2016
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Thanks for reading and the review zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is very attractive and easy to read. The subject of your poem is beautiful. It is more of a haiku than a 3/5/3 but that is fine.
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Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is very attractive and easy to read. The subject of your poem is beautiful. It is more of a haiku than a 3/5/3 but that is fine.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
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Very encouraging review - thanks for reading zanya
Comment from seaglass
mmmm, I love the smell of May...cherry blossoms, ally arrives.dogwoods, red bud, apple blossoms. Your poem depicts the aroma of this spring month when spring finally arrives.
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mmmm, I love the smell of May...cherry blossoms, ally arrives.dogwoods, red bud, apple blossoms. Your poem depicts the aroma of this spring month when spring finally arrives.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
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Delighted with this review Zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
How delightful, and so much imagery is intertwined in this lovely, well composed 3-5-3 entry. And who was it once said you can't say mush in just seven simple words?
Best of luck to you in your contest.
~Dean
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How delightful, and so much imagery is intertwined in this lovely, well composed 3-5-3 entry. And who was it once said you can't say mush in just seven simple words?
Best of luck to you in your contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 02-May-2016
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Thanks for reading and a great review zanya
Comment from William Ross
very good, don't really even need a picture to help set this one off. I can smell the spring flowers from the write. Great entry on the prompt. good thought. good luck on this.
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very good, don't really even need a picture to help set this one off. I can smell the spring flowers from the write. Great entry on the prompt. good thought. good luck on this.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
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Glad you enjoyed reading it zanya
Comment from sage17611
The picture displaying the poem is beautiful, the words in the poem reflects the picture. The poem has a good flow, with a nice message about May flowers. Very well written poem, good luck with the contest.
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The picture displaying the poem is beautiful, the words in the poem reflects the picture. The poem has a good flow, with a nice message about May flowers. Very well written poem, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2016
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Thank you for reading and the encouraging review zanya
