Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A compelling and thought provoking read about this state that affects so many. Well written. Best of luck with this contest.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2016

Thank you so much for your kind words.... sorry for the delayed response.

Comment from Madefromdragonfire

Average

Very interesting setting for a poem about mental illness, in the early moments of waking. I like it. Good use of vocabulary.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 06-May-2016

your review is lousy as is your writing

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

This is a very good poem and I really enjoyed reading it.The picture is perfect. Your words I'm sure many can relate.A very powerfully written poem

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

tjhanks

Comment from Kassa-Leigh

Excellent

This is a great poem! Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you all the luck! God bless!
Cheryl-Lynette

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thank you so much for your encouragement and kind review!

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

You have wrote quite an amazing poem as entry for this contest. It is brilliant and most creatively done. Way to go and see you at voting. Bravo, bravo, bravo.

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you verry much for this kind and thoughtful review!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine free verse poem
with some end rhymes
Excellent imagery and atmosphere
This could be mental illness
or simply creativity, both dwell on edges
Very fine art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Thank you so much for your kindness!