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Comment from Caressa_08
A virtual six, as we really need more teachers like yourself and you have every right to be proud of such accomplishments and think, too, people like you are a gift from God to bring understanding and encouragement to help young people attain their goals. Also, you are quite a gifted poet and for me, your poem was a joy to read!
Thanks for sharing & Best wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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A virtual six, as we really need more teachers like yourself and you have every right to be proud of such accomplishments and think, too, people like you are a gift from God to bring understanding and encouragement to help young people attain their goals. Also, you are quite a gifted poet and for me, your poem was a joy to read!
Thanks for sharing & Best wishes for your entry...Caressa_08
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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What a sweet response You made me smile . I feel appreciated and that is wonderful.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great story to teach other with talents are a great privilege and you did a wonderful job creating some winners and help them achieve their goals
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A great story to teach other with talents are a great privilege and you did a wonderful job creating some winners and help them achieve their goals
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you as always I love hearing from you.
Comment from TheresaWilliams
"Simple could not hide...."
Did you mean "simply?"
All in all the poem was a good one. I truly respect your love of children, especially the forgotten ones.
My only advice is to not use the "simply" so many times in one piece of work. Although I know it's difficult to get things to flow sometimes.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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"Simple could not hide...."
Did you mean "simply?"
All in all the poem was a good one. I truly respect your love of children, especially the forgotten ones.
My only advice is to not use the "simply" so many times in one piece of work. Although I know it's difficult to get things to flow sometimes.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Great advice, I will go back and look right now.
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Your poem kept me going , I never wanted it to end.Easy to understand and articulate. I am impressed and I know you put a lot of emotions in it. I LOVED YOUR INTRODUCTION ... Good job
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Your poem kept me going , I never wanted it to end.Easy to understand and articulate. I am impressed and I know you put a lot of emotions in it. I LOVED YOUR INTRODUCTION ... Good job
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I do think it is an accurate description of my life. I am so blessed.
Comment from Ricky1024
this is about writing entry much like my new book which is about me so you wrote about yourself mind me working compasses thousands of pages of course could have been writing so long it's been 13 years just a small miniscule part of the hundreds and hundreds of thousands of poems are written but good luck with this well-written also Ricky 1024
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this is about writing entry much like my new book which is about me so you wrote about yourself mind me working compasses thousands of pages of course could have been writing so long it's been 13 years just a small miniscule part of the hundreds and hundreds of thousands of poems are written but good luck with this well-written also Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your talking to me about your book"
Comment from Mrsjones14
Really nice poem charting the evolution of your life. I like that as the poem begins there is an evident and fairly simple rhyming pattern and layout which evolves into something much more complex alongside your life.
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Really nice poem charting the evolution of your life. I like that as the poem begins there is an evident and fairly simple rhyming pattern and layout which evolves into something much more complex alongside your life.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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thank you so much, I truly like that you saw the acceleration in the poem.
