Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

hello poet

the entry may be brief
however
the message speaks volumes
I love the positiveness of it all
your word choices were original to convey the message
well done

thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks for the insightful review, cheers, j

Comment from bettykult

Excellent

I liked your poem.It gave me hope, while the others were such downers.It rhymed nicely and had a smooth flow of words.It wasn't long but made your point.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Short, sweet and very much to the point. Good selection of verbiage to help the reader feel the essence of your work. I like the artwork you chose to accompany the piece. Fits well. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is a fantastic great flowing poem that goes great with the picture you selected. Way to go fitting this entry for the contest. See ya at judging...

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Thanks for the review, it was a fun contest, see you at judging, cheers, j

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This is an excellent interpretation of the image. The poem is simple but the ideas expressed are profound and the reader can relate to the situation portrayed. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review. Sometimes we are on pause and don't know it. Cheers, j