Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "For Better For Worse"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
21 total reviews
Comment from L.lora
Easy flowing, smooth and
the sentiment most clearly
portrayed. One little iddy-
biddy thing: "for me to carry on." needs
a coma instead of a period, figures
it was probably a typo..Best of luck
with the contest...Lora
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Easy flowing, smooth and
the sentiment most clearly
portrayed. One little iddy-
biddy thing: "for me to carry on." needs
a coma instead of a period, figures
it was probably a typo..Best of luck
with the contest...Lora
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Lora, thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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You are most welcome my friend. Lora
Comment from AnnaLinda
Marijke,
Well good for you that you have such a loving, strong
and faithful husband that you can entrust your heart
and life to.
Your poem is well written and I can actually relate to
so much of what you have conveyed in it. I think this
poem about the love you and George share makes a
perfect faith entry.
Linda
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Marijke,
Well good for you that you have such a loving, strong
and faithful husband that you can entrust your heart
and life to.
Your poem is well written and I can actually relate to
so much of what you have conveyed in it. I think this
poem about the love you and George share makes a
perfect faith entry.
Linda
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Linda, thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Such a nice poem fionageorge about how you have faith in your husband is a great message o married ladies to read, especially this part
I trust you with my very life,
our love solid and strong.
As long as I have faith in you,
I know I can't go wrong.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Such a nice poem fionageorge about how you have faith in your husband is a great message o married ladies to read, especially this part
I trust you with my very life,
our love solid and strong.
As long as I have faith in you,
I know I can't go wrong.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Gert, thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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You are welcome Marijke
Gert
Comment from Douglas Paul
Your poem has good tempo and rhyme so it flows smoothly as your poems usually do. It sounds like you have a very good relationship ith your husband - good for you
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Your poem has good tempo and rhyme so it flows smoothly as your poems usually do. It sounds like you have a very good relationship ith your husband - good for you
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Douglas, thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from ~Dovey
#30!!!!! Yay! You made it! :) What a wonderful job forging through to meet the challenge this month.
Your relationship with George sounds amazing! :) I am sure he will appreciate the sentiment of the poem. I enjoyed the unique approach to the Faith Contest!
my favorite stanza:
I trust you with my very life,
our love solid and strong.
As long as I have faith in you,
I know I can't go wrong.
Good luck!
Kim
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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#30!!!!! Yay! You made it! :) What a wonderful job forging through to meet the challenge this month.
Your relationship with George sounds amazing! :) I am sure he will appreciate the sentiment of the poem. I enjoyed the unique approach to the Faith Contest!
my favorite stanza:
I trust you with my very life,
our love solid and strong.
As long as I have faith in you,
I know I can't go wrong.
Good luck!
Kim
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Kim, thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from BeasPeas
Cheers to you and George. He sounds like the kind of partner that you can rely on and respect. We all need someone who "has our back" and vice versa. Smooth reading with good word choices to progress your poem. Clearly written with good rhyme. Marilyn
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Cheers to you and George. He sounds like the kind of partner that you can rely on and respect. We all need someone who "has our back" and vice versa. Smooth reading with good word choices to progress your poem. Clearly written with good rhyme. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Marilyn thank you so much for this kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Love your faith poem. What better faith than the faith and trust in a relationship with someone you love. Good abcb rhyme maintained throughout. A strong closing stanza and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Love your faith poem. What better faith than the faith and trust in a relationship with someone you love. Good abcb rhyme maintained throughout. A strong closing stanza and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thanks Dorothy for your kind comments and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from bob cullen
A poem with a special message. I must admit I love tribute poems as they always come directly from the heart. And this is rich in that area.
Your rhyme and meter flows nicely.
A personal question. Didn't you write previously under a different name. Was it Sally something. Good to see you back
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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A poem with a special message. I must admit I love tribute poems as they always come directly from the heart. And this is rich in that area.
Your rhyme and meter flows nicely.
A personal question. Didn't you write previously under a different name. Was it Sally something. Good to see you back
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Hi Bob. No, I have always written under the Fionageorge name. I have been away for nearly 3 years,, and have only come back to past month or so. But I remember your name from before. Thanks for remembering me. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
There are more ways to be supportive than constantly talking to somebody.
As long as the other person is there, and you know it, that should suffice through "the good times and the bad".
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There are more ways to be supportive than constantly talking to somebody.
As long as the other person is there, and you know it, that should suffice through "the good times and the bad".
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Yes,... I do enough talking for both of us! Thanks Brett, for your kind comments and review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful poem to your husband who truly loves you. My late husband was the same, he never say a harsh word to me, but he was always there in my darkest times he was my crutch to find the light again.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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A beautiful poem to your husband who truly loves you. My late husband was the same, he never say a harsh word to me, but he was always there in my darkest times he was my crutch to find the light again.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for this kind review. Sounds like your late husband and my husband may have been kindred sould. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Yes, they could easily be while reading your poem his face pops up every time you mentioned his qualities.
