Life In A Chamber
Description of the beginning of life32 total reviews
Comment from Kooky Clown
l liked this a lot certainly a new slant at the beginning of life as we know it. One thing where you mention "I" in the poem these should all be in capital letter form,
Apart from that a good piece.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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l liked this a lot certainly a new slant at the beginning of life as we know it. One thing where you mention "I" in the poem these should all be in capital letter form,
Apart from that a good piece.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you
Comment from GeraldS
This is a nicely written piece that gives the reader pause for thought. On its face it's meaning is clear. But I think it works on two levels. We all live our lives in a chamber, sometimes of our own making, sometimes shaped by society. And we become comfortable in that life and shocked when change impacts us.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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This is a nicely written piece that gives the reader pause for thought. On its face it's meaning is clear. But I think it works on two levels. We all live our lives in a chamber, sometimes of our own making, sometimes shaped by society. And we become comfortable in that life and shocked when change impacts us.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your unique meaning to the poem.
Comment from aryr
What an amazing poem. Your words flow well but they also address the truth of life in the womb. You captured activity and sensations. The picture was awesome and your choice of green print on a black page definitely had an impact. Very enjoyable reading, thank you.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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What an amazing poem. Your words flow well but they also address the truth of life in the womb. You captured activity and sensations. The picture was awesome and your choice of green print on a black page definitely had an impact. Very enjoyable reading, thank you.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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. Thanks for you review
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You are most welcome.
Comment from foxangie123
I thought I had read this yet maybe not. It is utstanding and down right brilliant my friend. Wow this is exceptional poetry right here. Way to go. This is pure gold.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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I thought I had read this yet maybe not. It is utstanding and down right brilliant my friend. Wow this is exceptional poetry right here. Way to go. This is pure gold.
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you i appreciate hugs
Comment from William Ross
Life in a chamber, if they were smart they wouldn't want to come out in this world today. great write and thought on this, have a great evening.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Life in a chamber, if they were smart they wouldn't want to come out in this world today. great write and thought on this, have a great evening.
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you my friend I appreciate
Comment from Chrissy710
How unique and perceptive. You really brought the baby to life with you words and I found this really good. Your poem had a nice rhythm and rhymed appropriately. I wonder if all babies feel like this. Well done Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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How unique and perceptive. You really brought the baby to life with you words and I found this really good. Your poem had a nice rhythm and rhymed appropriately. I wonder if all babies feel like this. Well done Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you so much I appreciate
Comment from VaV-VOOM
That's a cool way to say what the baby may be feeling, and thinking while there in the "chamber". Anyhow, I really enjoyed reviewing this poem, and the picture is an awesome match. Thank you for sharing. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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That's a cool way to say what the baby may be feeling, and thinking while there in the "chamber". Anyhow, I really enjoyed reviewing this poem, and the picture is an awesome match. Thank you for sharing. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
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Your welcome. VaV-VOOM!
Comment from ioana.u
That was really beautiful! It's good to see things from the baby's point of view, to understand how fragile they are. I had the tears of joy a few months ago, so your poem was right on the spot.
Ioana
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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That was really beautiful! It's good to see things from the baby's point of view, to understand how fragile they are. I had the tears of joy a few months ago, so your poem was right on the spot.
Ioana
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Your thought provoking words leave me wishing that every child had the safety of a chamber. That his/her life was safe in the womb. Your compassion is shown with this writing. Well done
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Your thought provoking words leave me wishing that every child had the safety of a chamber. That his/her life was safe in the womb. Your compassion is shown with this writing. Well done
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your heartfelt review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
The safest place to be in the mother's womb no one can hurt your feelings or make you feel unworthy. You are special and no one else can be exactly like you even when you leave the safe chamber for this big world. Once you are out if there you can't return.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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The safest place to be in the mother's womb no one can hurt your feelings or make you feel unworthy. You are special and no one else can be exactly like you even when you leave the safe chamber for this big world. Once you are out if there you can't return.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Than you for the review
