Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
and your words are so on point
And I love the message within your poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

Comment from lightink

Excellent

Awww! Aren't those moments the best? It's crazy when suddenly we remember all those feelings, just out of the blue! What a lovely poem/experience!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Excellent topic for a "short form" Deb :-)
(glad to see you got your mojo back)

Funny, but true, the right kiss at the right time can reawaken all
kinds of taken for granted feelings ;-)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Cool artwork... and I love the alliteration in this... as well the assonance...
great job in such a short poem. the artwork felt like a 60's flashback. LOL
Cat

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Debra,
I enjoyed your poem. The few words are powerful.

With the picture, they make a great poem with so much truth.

Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

For many.
Excellent.
I picture two ex lovers experiencing another try.
I see couples that have drifted apart renewing in just one kiss.
I see rebirth and renewal.
Nicely done

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

It's wonderful how a hug or kiss, or even a friendly/loving touch can make us feel so much better and forget all our problems for at least a moment, Debs.

I get very little human contact, so I bet my goldfish, Goldie gets tired of me keep taking her out of her bowl for a big slobbery wet kiss, though she's kind enough not to say so.

Mind you, my pet parrot, Polly, gets extremely jealous and gives me a real foul-mouthed ear-bashing.

Hmmm...where are my meds? Hahaha.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Ask no questions ... Big smiles, I don't need to ask questions, my imagination tells me all is well in the White household! Short and very sweet poem, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Great job with this, Debra. So true. Women like the romance in a relationship. Presentation is very interesting and dynamic. Good choice in words and image. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016