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keep your hope alive....

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Comment from tfawcus
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Indeed a picture to swim in and nearly drown. Thank goodness for the salvation of the rope! The green cloud of dusty memories had a lovely touch of verdigris about it! Out with the Silvo to restore the cloud's silver lining!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    thank you tf :-)
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is very imaginative poetic take on the picture. It also give a clear metaphoric view of clinical depression and how hard it is to climb out of it.

Hope you do well in the contest,

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    thank you dp :-)
reply by dragonpoet on 27-Apr-2016
    No problem, sb.

    dp
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Such desperation and realized sorrow make this piece a very beautiful, sad, wonderful work! The presentation, including the artwork are great! I loved it and wish I could give you six stars for it, as it is well-deserving of that!!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    thank you susanne :-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
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We all have different perceptions of what we see. Good entry for the contest. I like the picture you picked. Good luck to you.

teresa

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    thank you teresa :-)
Comment from tony bronk
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A very colorful poem, filled with colorful images and ideas floating all about the place! A very well written poem! Tony

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    hehe thank you tony :)
Comment from djeckert
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I love this metaphorical description of battling a bout of depression, coupled with the symbolism of the colors. Very cool indeed . nicely done. if I had a six it would be yours.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    thank you dj :-)