Comment from l.raven

Excellent

one of my favorite things to do...is lay in bed with the one you love...and listen to the rain...sounds like music...very nicely written...love your poem...xxoo

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers,j

reply by l.raven on 29-Apr-2016

you are so very welcome...xxoo Linda

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Sounds romantic. Waffles, coffee and the paper in bed on a rainy day. I can't think of a better way to spend that kind of a day.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016

Thanks for the insightful review Judy, cheers, j

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Well written this sets up a great and vivid picture of urban living and urban love. I like that slant you have put on this. Very subtle. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

I love rainy Sundays, reading the paper in bed with coffee.Thanks for the review. cheers, j

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Rainy mornings is an invitation for pancakes or waffle breakfast. When the waffle is heart shaped, there must be romance in the air too.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

You are very insightful. Thanks for the review Sandra, cheers, j

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

it sound lovely ,this scenario that your write paints. A very strong entry in the contest... it taps into all kinds of sensory delights for sure. Good luck. God Blesses

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016

I love rainy Sundays with the paper and coffee in bed. Thanks for the review, cheers, j