Comment from Lulube

Excellent

A true statement and we all have had those days. at least you wrote about it eh? Almost at the end of your April writings, you can do it. A short poem on the trials and tribulations for this April writing, could be used. Or the coming up of another end to school for work and kids at home. just trying to help out

lulube

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I can relate to your poem so well
Some times I say what the H--
My minds a blank
my mused skipped town
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

LOL, the despair of it all, this is a wonderful apology poem although I don't think it's required. It's quite an effort to write something every day, why not write one called 'The Missing Day' :)
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Debra,
I enjoyed your poem. It really is cute. Thanks for the notes.

Even when you don't have anything to say, you have something to say.

I'm fixin' [Texas English] to go to bed.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

[write about the fog we hear that you always have]

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2016

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Love it, Debra. Hang in there. I think we're all feeling the same way. Looking forward to my twice a week post when April is over. Your little poem is amusing and TRUE. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

What a great message and I can so relate! I can be so motivated and then it seems that all has been said and the desert of thought begins. Never fear, the well is deep and just needs the right trigger, then away your pen will go writing the next beautiful creation. I liked this one because it says and describes the lack of words so poetically!! Keep on!ð???

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

Go Debra! Go Debra. you can do it....(choo choo choo) All you need is chocolate and coffee. There you go write about chocolate and everything you can make with chocolate. :D

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Now there's an idea, Linda! Thank you for your lovely encouragement. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from P1

Excellent

there is nothing wrong with what you
hae written today. i really like it. it is
honest and it rhymes. it tells a story
and i really enjoyed reading it. hope you
do as well tomorrow

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Hi Paige :) Thank you so much for your love feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Well at least it rhymes and tells the truth. I think this challenge is really a hard one, but you did meet the requirements. Your poem is actually pretty cute

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

Hi Douglas :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Hoping for some inspiration to sneak up on me soon!
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Your last line doesn't scan to me, Debs, though the meter in the rest of the poem is tops.

Yes, I understand, and I used to force writes, too.

I couldn't give a flying fig about it, or rankings anymore, and maybe I'll never write another word of any consequence...and so what? ;-)

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016

So what indeed! Good to hear from you Ray..... disappearing under a big pile of responsibility at the mo - why did I think I had time for NaPoWriMo?!
Take care and thanks for your feedback. Cheers, debs xx