Intuition
Intuition is the sixth sense86 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Hi, Rp. A significant write here. Intuition as the six sense not such a bad observation or statement as it is this, along with the other five we tend to live by.
A sensible write, you give good reason. Good to read something from you again.
Have a great day.
Good write.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi, Rp. A significant write here. Intuition as the six sense not such a bad observation or statement as it is this, along with the other five we tend to live by.
A sensible write, you give good reason. Good to read something from you again.
Have a great day.
Good write.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello RGStar,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments..
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from William Ross
This is good, great write, good rhyming and rhythm on this. intuition is something man has lost a lot of, But with practice one could learn to listen and follow. great job and good luck on this.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is good, great write, good rhyming and rhythm on this. intuition is something man has lost a lot of, But with practice one could learn to listen and follow. great job and good luck on this.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello William Ross,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from krys123
RPSaxena;
-this intuition is the direct acceptance of truth, fact, etc., independent of any reasoning process; immediate apprehension. An immediate understanding of an object not inferred, or determined by a previous cognition of the same object. Otherwise a distinct clairvoyance, instinct for hunch of something not determined.
-you predicted that intuition foresees sounded ill omen but this is not necessarily true it can predict the good truth in things. Most of the things you say are very true throughout your writing.
-the rhythmic meter being iambic tetrameter and the cadence, timing and tempo of fully making the reading fear, fluid and very easy.
-you rhyming words for contingent and supportive to the meaning and concept of each of your lines therefore making your rhythm to flow smoothly.
- none of your rhymes for store labor which was also helpful.
-I thought the picture was very suitable, appropriate, relative and supportive to the meaning, theme and concept of your writing.
- thank you for sharing and posting in the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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RPSaxena;
-this intuition is the direct acceptance of truth, fact, etc., independent of any reasoning process; immediate apprehension. An immediate understanding of an object not inferred, or determined by a previous cognition of the same object. Otherwise a distinct clairvoyance, instinct for hunch of something not determined.
-you predicted that intuition foresees sounded ill omen but this is not necessarily true it can predict the good truth in things. Most of the things you say are very true throughout your writing.
-the rhythmic meter being iambic tetrameter and the cadence, timing and tempo of fully making the reading fear, fluid and very easy.
-you rhyming words for contingent and supportive to the meaning and concept of each of your lines therefore making your rhythm to flow smoothly.
- none of your rhymes for store labor which was also helpful.
-I thought the picture was very suitable, appropriate, relative and supportive to the meaning, theme and concept of your writing.
- thank you for sharing and posting in the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Alex,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so detailed, lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are very welcome my dearest friends
Comment from candyfink
This is a precise description of intuition. This poem is well written. I have to say you are very talented in your hobby. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is a precise description of intuition. This poem is well written. I have to say you are very talented in your hobby. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Candybarr,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from BarnCat
Yours is a well thought out poem with an excellent presentation. Good meter and rhyme and interesting subject matter. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Yours is a well thought out poem with an excellent presentation. Good meter and rhyme and interesting subject matter. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in this lovely poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello BarnCat,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I believe in sixth sense too, but I think most people tend to doubt themselves and won't go with it. Most regret it when that sense was proved right. I enjoyed your poem, it was really interesting, and made me start to think when was the last time I trusted my intuition. Well done! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I believe in sixth sense too, but I think most people tend to doubt themselves and won't go with it. Most regret it when that sense was proved right. I enjoyed your poem, it was really interesting, and made me start to think when was the last time I trusted my intuition. Well done! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Sandra,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a great poem, and I agree with you about intuition. You have to know and feel how to percieve situations in order to be successful at them--likewise with people--much of how we interact is intuition. Some people don't have it and that is why they have so much difficulty dealing with others. Good work, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is a great poem, and I agree with you about intuition. You have to know and feel how to percieve situations in order to be successful at them--likewise with people--much of how we interact is intuition. Some people don't have it and that is why they have so much difficulty dealing with others. Good work, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Debbie,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Janet Foor
My daughter claims great intuition - she always called it "discernment". She would say she just knew it was the right or the wrong thing based on her gut feelings. And she wasn't swayed by opinion - "not even mine". haha
Today, she is the head volleyball coach at Eastern Carolina University, with a wonderful husband and three fine boys. Two of them in college.
I think you are right, Intuition is the sixth sense. Very will written with some sage advice. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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My daughter claims great intuition - she always called it "discernment". She would say she just knew it was the right or the wrong thing based on her gut feelings. And she wasn't swayed by opinion - "not even mine". haha
Today, she is the head volleyball coach at Eastern Carolina University, with a wonderful husband and three fine boys. Two of them in college.
I think you are right, Intuition is the sixth sense. Very will written with some sage advice. Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Janet,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and quoting your daughter's words as well as experiences which give me a personal touch.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm still workin' on my own intuition, RPSaxena. It seems to be an ongoing process for me.
I agree with what you wrote in your well rhymed, uplifting piece here, however. Think positive and positive things will begin to happen for you.
Think negatively--always seeing the proverbial glass half empty, instead of half full, and you could wind up just like me.
We all have a destined path we must travel. Some are rocky, others are smooth, then...some are laden with quicksand, treacherous, and full of hidden sink holes.
Your poem is very well composed, and each rhyming quatrain is superbly crafted.
Bravo, and best of luck to you in the contest...
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I'm still workin' on my own intuition, RPSaxena. It seems to be an ongoing process for me.
I agree with what you wrote in your well rhymed, uplifting piece here, however. Think positive and positive things will begin to happen for you.
Think negatively--always seeing the proverbial glass half empty, instead of half full, and you could wind up just like me.
We all have a destined path we must travel. Some are rocky, others are smooth, then...some are laden with quicksand, treacherous, and full of hidden sink holes.
Your poem is very well composed, and each rhyming quatrain is superbly crafted.
Bravo, and best of luck to you in the contest...
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Dean,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Best of Luck Wishes.
Dear Friend, I read your inspiring words and I've no hesitation in saying 'That's why you have a glorious status in the literary circle.'
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I relish my own intuition and it has served me so well over the years. You have a great imagery to accompany this work with the human heart and mind working in tandem. My favorite lines are in the second stanza. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I relish my own intuition and it has served me so well over the years. You have a great imagery to accompany this work with the human heart and mind working in tandem. My favorite lines are in the second stanza. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Mary Wakeford,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments, and also hinting at your favorite lines which gives me a personal touch.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
