Intuition
Intuition is the sixth sense86 total reviews
Comment from Natalie Walker
This is a nice poem. Personally, I'm not really a fan of repeating the same word at the end of two lines of a rhyming poem (being, well-being). But, I suppose it works in this context. I like the structure and message of this poem. It is very clean and well written. Nice work.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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This is a nice poem. Personally, I'm not really a fan of repeating the same word at the end of two lines of a rhyming poem (being, well-being). But, I suppose it works in this context. I like the structure and message of this poem. It is very clean and well written. Nice work.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Natalie Walker,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting and positive comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Stephanie Kastner
If we all listened to that little voice inside of us, I swear this world would be a better place. Our intuition could guide us to do what's right, steering clear of trouble and all strife. But we need to learn to listen. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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If we all listened to that little voice inside of us, I swear this world would be a better place. Our intuition could guide us to do what's right, steering clear of trouble and all strife. But we need to learn to listen. Nice poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Stephanie Kastner,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Eric1
Hi RPSaxena, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, It flows beautifully and has a wonderful rhyming scheme, great use of imagery and description, great rhythm, an all round brilliant poem and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi RPSaxena, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, It flows beautifully and has a wonderful rhyming scheme, great use of imagery and description, great rhythm, an all round brilliant poem and I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Eric1,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Best of Luck Wishes. I feel highly honored.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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You are welcome my friend.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well I have to agree and as a woman I have definitely felt what I considered to be intuition kicking in when required.
It DOES seem to be a natural instinct, at least in women haha. Common sense elevation means you are more aware of what is going on around you, hence you are able to make more well informed decisions.
Nicely done
Cheers P
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Well I have to agree and as a woman I have definitely felt what I considered to be intuition kicking in when required.
It DOES seem to be a natural instinct, at least in women haha. Common sense elevation means you are more aware of what is going on around you, hence you are able to make more well informed decisions.
Nicely done
Cheers P
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Closetpoetjester,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments. "It DOES seem to be a natural instinct,..in women..." Yes, of course, much better developed! It's a well-established and widely recognized fact.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent piece and a great description of that place in the back of our minds we cant explain but one that protects us in ways we are unable to do for ourselves.
Very nicely done in flow and rhyme.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Excellent piece and a great description of that place in the back of our minds we cant explain but one that protects us in ways we are unable to do for ourselves.
Very nicely done in flow and rhyme.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Barb Hensongispsaca,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from charmaineccloete
I am a strong believer in instinct...intuition that feeling sometimes unknown but cloyingly present when warning you against impending disaster or strangely enough a pleasant surprise. It all depend on the moment of realization.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I am a strong believer in instinct...intuition that feeling sometimes unknown but cloyingly present when warning you against impending disaster or strangely enough a pleasant surprise. It all depend on the moment of realization.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Charmaineccloete,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments backed by the most coveted '5+1shiny' - SIX STARS.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from John Parkin
Your five verses depict intuition and its role in our lives. All of us have it and some trust it more than others. If ones intuition leads to success as you say, it leads to more success and the more success you have, the more trust you put in intuition. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Your five verses depict intuition and its role in our lives. All of us have it and some trust it more than others. If ones intuition leads to success as you say, it leads to more success and the more success you have, the more trust you put in intuition. Excellent work.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello John Parking,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
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Your welcome.
Comment from ciliverde
I do believe in intuition and use it in my work quite often. I like the fact that you call it a sixth sense that resides in every being. Some do make better use of it than others...the thing is, you must trust in it.
Carol
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I do believe in intuition and use it in my work quite often. I like the fact that you call it a sixth sense that resides in every being. Some do make better use of it than others...the thing is, you must trust in it.
Carol
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Ciliverde,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from MissMerri
A well-put-together, wise and very readable poem, this one. I enjoyed the language and the good sense in the thoughts expressed.
In this one line, I thought you might have meant to use a different word:
"It hints us what needs to be done" makes me wonder if you meant to say "it hints at what needs to be done," or perhaps, "it tells us, or shows us..." Anyway, maybe you meant it to be exactly as it is, but I'd like to know for sure. I very much enjoyed reading this. MM
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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A well-put-together, wise and very readable poem, this one. I enjoyed the language and the good sense in the thoughts expressed.
In this one line, I thought you might have meant to use a different word:
"It hints us what needs to be done" makes me wonder if you meant to say "it hints at what needs to be done," or perhaps, "it tells us, or shows us..." Anyway, maybe you meant it to be exactly as it is, but I'd like to know for sure. I very much enjoyed reading this. MM
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello MissMerri,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting comments.
About your query: Both are right, but I've used it in the latter sense.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
Comment from sage17611
I enjoyed reading your poem about intuition, certainly our intuition is connected to the psychic ability that we all possess. Good subject, nice flow of words, I liked the rhyme scheme, good job and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I enjoyed reading your poem about intuition, certainly our intuition is connected to the psychic ability that we all possess. Good subject, nice flow of words, I liked the rhyme scheme, good job and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hello Sage,
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you very much for your so lovely, morale boosting comments and Good Luck Wishes.
Have a pleasant time!
~RP.
