Where Did He Go?
200 Word Contest2 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This makes no sense. He's gone. Why? How? Why did she give him keys? To what? I don't even know who Sebastian is, let alone care about him, and the twist at the end is simply that he's gone?
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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This makes no sense. He's gone. Why? How? Why did she give him keys? To what? I don't even know who Sebastian is, let alone care about him, and the twist at the end is simply that he's gone?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Thanks. you're right. I've withdrawn it and I'm going to write a story of it's own. I have an idea. You've just inspired me. Thanks for doing that.
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You're welcome. Can't wait to read it. Once I learn your name. :)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Wow, just like that Sebastian and the headaches are gone.
Good job of putting together a 200 word story and tying it in to writing one as well.
Flash fiction is fun to write, but it is a challenge. Well done with it,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Wow, just like that Sebastian and the headaches are gone.
Good job of putting together a 200 word story and tying it in to writing one as well.
Flash fiction is fun to write, but it is a challenge. Well done with it,
Rhonda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Thank you very much for this encouraging review.
