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Comment from scd41
I liked you have compared a writer's mind racing for a contest with a marathon runner trying to come first on the finishing line. An out-of-box thinking that deserved the win. The picture only accentuates the feeling while the alliterations raise the appreciation bar. The punch line adds a photo finish.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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I liked you have compared a writer's mind racing for a contest with a marathon runner trying to come first on the finishing line. An out-of-box thinking that deserved the win. The picture only accentuates the feeling while the alliterations raise the appreciation bar. The punch line adds a photo finish.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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thank you so much. This was a great Potlach challenge. My first Acrostic and it is a type of poem I will try again. I have learned so much here.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Lovely acrostic in presentation and content. The heart of a writer linked to the heart of a runner...great comparison. The bright green background with the chosen colored fonts seem to make the page pulsate as if a heart would for the run, or the write.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Lovely acrostic in presentation and content. The heart of a writer linked to the heart of a runner...great comparison. The bright green background with the chosen colored fonts seem to make the page pulsate as if a heart would for the run, or the write.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. My first acrostic. Now I feel like I can write more of them.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Interesting how poet compares writing to marathon and finish line.
Tone upbeat and inspirational. Plenty of alliterations add to rhythm of poem. Check me out also.
liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Interesting how poet compares writing to marathon and finish line.
Tone upbeat and inspirational. Plenty of alliterations add to rhythm of poem. Check me out also.
liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I enjoyed the potlach challenge.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Morning Marathon is a marvelous little poem that tells each of us how you find your inspiration for writing. You cleverly intertwine the threat of writing creatively and the thread of running competitively. Your words are like the bark of the starter's pistol that signals to both runners and spectators alike that the race is underway. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Morning Marathon is a marvelous little poem that tells each of us how you find your inspiration for writing. You cleverly intertwine the threat of writing creatively and the thread of running competitively. Your words are like the bark of the starter's pistol that signals to both runners and spectators alike that the race is underway. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much, it was a challenge in the format for potlach. It was my first attempt at an acrostic and I ran with it. LOL . I learn so much here every day.
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from AnnaLinda
jusylee72,
This is an outstanding entry for the acrostic contest.
I like your lines: "Racing thoughts invite me..."
That's a great match for your photo choice too
along with your last line: "Told until I pass the
finish line"
You also have very alliterated "C" line...jammed
with contrary words. Interesting and true.
Well done,
Linda
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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jusylee72,
This is an outstanding entry for the acrostic contest.
I like your lines: "Racing thoughts invite me..."
That's a great match for your photo choice too
along with your last line: "Told until I pass the
finish line"
You also have very alliterated "C" line...jammed
with contrary words. Interesting and true.
Well done,
Linda
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. Potlach challenge that I completely enjoyed. First attempt at this for me and I ran with it LOl.
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lol...good for you! Keep up the good race.
Comment from seaglass
You have done very well with this acrostic poem. Each line is meaningful and descriptive as it describes the sounds, activities and experiences of this event. You have captured the excitement in words.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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You have done very well with this acrostic poem. Each line is meaningful and descriptive as it describes the sounds, activities and experiences of this event. You have captured the excitement in words.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. This was my first attempt at an acrostic and I ran with it Lol . I am learning so much here.
Comment from DonandVicki
I have had several of these days where I am either reading , writing or reviewing. Some days all three. I guess that counts as a marathon. Well written.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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I have had several of these days where I am either reading , writing or reviewing. Some days all three. I guess that counts as a marathon. Well written.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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One marathon down, next one starts tomorrow.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Wow, that is a very good poem. I like the alliteration you used. Also, the way you ended the poem is excellent.
Well done. You crossed the finish line and was the WINNER.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Wow, that is a very good poem. I like the alliteration you used. Also, the way you ended the poem is excellent.
Well done. You crossed the finish line and was the WINNER.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I learned so much by trying this new idea of poetry.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Congratulations on the prompt win! I like the 'C' alliteration in the next to last line. Great acrostic form.
~~Teresa~~
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Congratulations on the prompt win! I like the 'C' alliteration in the next to last line. Great acrostic form.
~~Teresa~~
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. I appreciate it so much.
Comment from candyfink
This takes the reader into the moment that you are referring to. The imaginary is fabulous. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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This takes the reader into the moment that you are referring to. The imaginary is fabulous. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. this was my first attempt at an acrostic and I ran with it. Lol . I love the new things fan story is teaching me every day.
