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Grandma's gift

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Can you adopt me? Please? LoL nobody has ever bought a car for me. What a lovely gesture. Your grand daughter looks very happy. Good job with the poem!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from Judy Couch
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We always kid our grandchildren about everyone else having to get off the highway when they start driving. It never seems to work, though. Good luck with yours.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from VaV-VOOM
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Nice poem, and I am glad I take the time to vote on these contests. They are all so fun to read. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck. Write On! VaV-VOOM!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from robyn corum
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I remember these experiences with each of my children. It is a blessing to be able to do this - and a help to the family as a whole. Congrats. Funny stuff! Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from tony bronk
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I too bought a car for my grandchild, but for my grandson, but it turned out okay. This is very funny, and I hope just that. Good write. Tony

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This is a good entry for the 34 syllable contest. If only my grandma bought me a car - very lucky Emma! This piece is lighthearted and fun. A pleasurable read and should do well in the competition. Best of luck ~DD

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from DonandVicki
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It is a wonderful thing to be able to do this for your grandchildren, I'm sure grandpa is smilling. Very well written and I can see all the smiles.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

Comment from Pantygynt
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I wish I'd had a grandma like you. Neat little rhyme though and a good point to make in the interests of road safety. My first car was a one tenth share in a hears. I guess that'll be my last car too except I'll probably have exclusive rights.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Oh you made my day! I had an old Corvair with a fan belt that kept slipping off! Thanks for writing.
Comment from DR DIP
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haha that's funny I have a daughter who thinks she's the best driver ever and when she's a passenger she tells me what I am doing wrong. I can relate to your 34 syllable poem but could have written a saga lol

dip

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Dr.Dip, Yeppers, My granddaughter is helpful to me when I am driving. I never go fast enough when the light turns green. lol
Comment from sage17611
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LOL...hopefully she's a good driver. This is a cute poem with a nice flow of words, the picture depicts the poem nicely, good choice. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Thanks so very much for reading this!( Yep, I hope so, too.)