New Car
Grandma's gift33 total reviews
Comment from scd41
Grandmas' love for their grandchildren is proverbial and your gift of a new car to Emma is a bright example. The poem adds a dose of much needed humor. Sometimes, grandchildren become wayward due to indulgence of grandparents. I am sure it is not the case here.
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Grandmas' love for their grandchildren is proverbial and your gift of a new car to Emma is a bright example. The poem adds a dose of much needed humor. Sometimes, grandchildren become wayward due to indulgence of grandparents. I am sure it is not the case here.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
Comment from kiwisteveh
I shudder when I see students at the school where I teach studying tor their Driver's Licence - I wouldn't trust some of them to walk safely on the footpath, so goodness knows what they will be like behind the wheel of a car!
Cute little poem with a humorous message - let's hope you are joking.
Steve
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I shudder when I see students at the school where I teach studying tor their Driver's Licence - I wouldn't trust some of them to walk safely on the footpath, so goodness knows what they will be like behind the wheel of a car!
Cute little poem with a humorous message - let's hope you are joking.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
Comment from Kazzawin
I'm sure Emma won't let you down!
What a lovely gesture, one she will always remember and treasure.
Great job done with the syllable count : )
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I'm sure Emma won't let you down!
What a lovely gesture, one she will always remember and treasure.
Great job done with the syllable count : )
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
Comment from mfowler
Your poem is a breath of fresh air, so everyday normal, and so funny. Your notes help greatly in explaining Grandma's assignment; the buying of a car for your granddaughter with inheritance money. The job is one of joy as for a young person, this is a seminal day. But, your closure is a hoot. You have to warn 'everyone off the highway'. I hope Emma loved her present. It's sounds like she did. A very cute, well scribed verse making the most of 34 syllables.
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Your poem is a breath of fresh air, so everyday normal, and so funny. Your notes help greatly in explaining Grandma's assignment; the buying of a car for your granddaughter with inheritance money. The job is one of joy as for a young person, this is a seminal day. But, your closure is a hoot. You have to warn 'everyone off the highway'. I hope Emma loved her present. It's sounds like she did. A very cute, well scribed verse making the most of 34 syllables.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming and articulate poem about the potential hazard of a driving teen - kudos for such a fun and realistic read...
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In my opinion, a charming and articulate poem about the potential hazard of a driving teen - kudos for such a fun and realistic read...
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
Comment from dmt1967
I like this poem and it made me laugh. I enjoyed reading this one and loved the picture. I found this very funny as my sister is always saying to me, if I learn to drive, she will learn to fly lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I like this poem and it made me laugh. I enjoyed reading this one and loved the picture. I found this very funny as my sister is always saying to me, if I learn to drive, she will learn to fly lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
Comment from L.lora
Brief and to the point. You've
said so very much and in such
a clever way with so few words.
This is a delightful poem, one
that needs to be tacked up over
every Grandma's desk. no nits
or spags. Lora
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Brief and to the point. You've
said so very much and in such
a clever way with so few words.
This is a delightful poem, one
that needs to be tacked up over
every Grandma's desk. no nits
or spags. Lora
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
Comment from BruceMiller
First you give them a car, and the next thing you know: they're driving you to drink. (lol) You have a cute poem here; it should do well in the contest. Cheers.
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First you give them a car, and the next thing you know: they're driving you to drink. (lol) You have a cute poem here; it should do well in the contest. Cheers.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
Comment from John Parkin
34 Syllables and you nailed it. I just bought my grandson a car and I know the feeling. You covered the driving experience and we can fill in the blanks.
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34 Syllables and you nailed it. I just bought my grandson a car and I know the feeling. You covered the driving experience and we can fill in the blanks.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
Comment from jusylee72
That is every Grand Parent and Parent's night mare. It is hard to let them out of sight especially in a car for the first time. Thank you for helping her out by buying that first car.
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That is every Grand Parent and Parent's night mare. It is hard to let them out of sight especially in a car for the first time. Thank you for helping her out by buying that first car.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
