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NaPoWriMo 2016 Challenge (30 Poems in April)

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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Ease our pain, Ease our pain (lower case 'e' in second ease)

A well written poem and so many song titles. A great entry. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Debbie,
    Thanks for catching the e's... I'll fix that.

    I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. :) Thanks for the help and best wishes.

    Kim
Comment from Sis Cat
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This is another great tribute poem among many I have read and reviewed today. I love how you reprised and revised his Purple Rain song, incorporating the titles of many of his best-loved songs. I particularly love this passage:

"We never ever wanted to discover
This hole that even time will never mend
Our farewell just became forever
When the angels swooped in to descend."

This poem is well-rhymed, creative, and heart felt. Thank you for sharing your tribute Princely Poem Prompt.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Sis Cat,

    Thank you for the extensive comments on my tribute to Prince. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts, especially noting the passage which spoke to you. This is a wonderful review. :)

    Kim
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Dovey

= I didn't realize how big a star he was, until his untimely death.
= I'm a country music gal, so I've not listened to much of his music.
= Such a sad thing to pass so young. We just never know.
= This is a beautiful dedication to Prince, and entry.
= Good luck in the contest.

=::= A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! =::=
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)

=::= Feel free to visit my profile on Amazon

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Jax!

    He was quite innovative in his style. I was an 80's teen, and that is when he really hit it big with Purple Rain... he had amazing talent. Something of a little known fact is that he wrote a lot of hit songs that weren't "his" songs... for other artists, and worked to help launch the careers of several artists, too.

    Thanks for the lovely review.

    Kim
Comment from LisaD123
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This is an eloquent and original take on the prompt. The intertwining of the song titles into the verses is cleverly managed and well thought out. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Lisa,

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review this tribute piece, I know it is a bit long. I appreciate the time you've taken and your kind comments.

    Kim
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A wonderful tribute to a her well known and popular artist of our own time. A wonderful idea to use titles of his songs to write this excellent tribute

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Thanks, Sandra!

    That is the stipulation of the contest, to use as many of his titles as possible. I managed 44 lol He had so many albums, I think I barely scratched the surface. Thank you for a great review. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

    Kim
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I need a ten but have only a five to give.
This was excellently done and I loved the flow of words as you went from piece to piece.
Pefect piece and my vote for the best.

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Hi Barb,

    I've never received a virtual 10 before, but you've put me over the moon! :) Thank you so much for the enthusiastic compliments! I am so honored!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

    Kim