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To Last Forever

Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Prince of Wisdom"
Poems by Michael

44 total reviews 
Comment from tony bronk
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You are among the millions mourning and paying tribute to Prince today, and you did it compassionately and creatively. Have a wonderful writing day! Tony

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    Hey Tony...-smile-
    why thank you...it was my pleasure to honor him. love Michael
Comment from Pili Pubul
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Your spiritual gift keeps growing my friend . Excellent poetic expression .I love the emotional uniqueness you always have.
I miss you in the dreamy park. Love u. Pili

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    Pili...-smile-
    I miss you too. say a prayer for you every night. Are things getting any better...? the pain...? I would that no more ever find you, hidden in the must comfortable love there ever was. I'm real sorry about all this...love you forever Michael
reply by Pili Pubul on 06-May-2016
    Love you
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
    love you too...-smile-...just got home....been working a lot lately...but when I get some time I'm going to write you something really pretty....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Aww, Michael, I'm glad you wrote this, you are the only one who has touched on his childhood. I will miss him, but he left his music for us all to enjoy, what a legacy!
This is a lovely tribute, my dear friend. Love you always. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    Hi Sandy...-smile-
    Thank you Sweetheart....always my pleasure to see you. love michael
Comment from Leineco
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A heart song in the Man's honor. He was an irresistible force
in the world of music - perhaps because he overcame
that which would stop him.

Myself, I fought this magnetism - too cool to fall under his
spell, don't you know. And yet, somehow, he wriggled his
way into my blood, that is to say, his music did.

It is a distinctly purple rain that falls as tears of our memories.

Unfortunately it's Saturday, and the best I can offer is a Five :-(

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
    thank you Dear Poet.
    well you resisted me all these years ...I believe you...-smile-
    haha thank you Special. love Michael
Comment from Sandisan
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Interesting going back to his very beginning. He must have shown his
talent at a very early age but his family life was not stable. This was
well written and quite moving.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    I don't really know...I heard him tell some of his story in interviews. and some others talk about their experience with him.
    I just know he was a command performer...he had gift. love michael
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Hi Michael,

What a striking poem and memorial poem you have written
about Prince. I like your references to him being divinely
endowed. "robed in purple majesty" "angel dust down upon
the runts of David."

You make reference to his perseverance in the face of
father's lack of support. Your presentation and video
are also excellent.

Linda

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
    Hey Linda...-smile-
    I know he was endowed with God blessing because I witnessed it, listened to it. I don't know much of his personal life...only he made his presence known in mine. appreciate you stopping by...love michael
Comment from barkingdog
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What a lovely tribute to a genuine artist and activist.
I like the way you brought in his past and religious belief.

I applaud your presentation--the solitary piano...

Sorry, I've just been so upset about Prince's death. I would have given you a six if I had one left.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
    Well if that's true your rating was a lil ruff barking dog.....but woof ya gonna do howl at the moon
reply by barkingdog on 22-Apr-2016
    My finger must have slipped. Thank you for letting me know about my mistake. Sorry. I fixed it.
Comment from sage17611
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Wow! Beautiful "ode to Prince", he will be surely missed. The words in the poem flows nicely, with a nice message. I like the picture with his favorite color, the video is a nice touch, good job with this piece.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
    Why thank you very much.. Yes his presence will be. Anyone can lip sync not many are their music....love michael
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Beautiful tribute to a great musician. Was Prince a Jehovah
Witness? Lovely background and font coloring in photo. Just goes to show when someone keeps you from doing something, they may be deterring you from your great destiny. Great story of Prince's life. liberty justice

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
    yes Maam...that's what I hear. He was...-smile- I thank you for enjoying. love Michael
Comment from Janet Foor
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An excellent tribute to the "rock star" Prince. He will long be remembered and especially for Purple Rain. And yes, I'm wearing purple today. I met my grandsons for lunch and was pleased that they knew who I was talking about. Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
    Hi Janet...-smile- ...well I bet you wear purple well. Yes maam, once you seen him...its kinda hard to forget...hope you had a great lunch. love Michael