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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Hope is a Fickle Muse"NaPoWriMo 2016 Challenge (30 Poems in April)
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Comment from jane.fallon
Excellent.
Your rhyming is really good - sophisticated. You followed the rules of A Villanelle perfectly.
I like the sprinkling throughout the poem of "Fickle muse, Hope's a lady in disguise", and "Impassioned, she will tease and tantalize."
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Excellent.
Your rhyming is really good - sophisticated. You followed the rules of A Villanelle perfectly.
I like the sprinkling throughout the poem of "Fickle muse, Hope's a lady in disguise", and "Impassioned, she will tease and tantalize."
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you for the lovely comments, Jane. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review, especially noting the lines you enjoyed.
Comment from pmait
I love the villanelle form, and love how you use it in this poem. The choice of the art work is perfect, evoking the carnival atmosphere of the poetry, so you get the feeling that you are caught up in the emotions of the scene, obsessed with momentary glimpses of an elusive mysterious woman named "Hope." This is a villanelle which nearly approaches a pantoum in its haunting effect. Skillfully done!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I love the villanelle form, and love how you use it in this poem. The choice of the art work is perfect, evoking the carnival atmosphere of the poetry, so you get the feeling that you are caught up in the emotions of the scene, obsessed with momentary glimpses of an elusive mysterious woman named "Hope." This is a villanelle which nearly approaches a pantoum in its haunting effect. Skillfully done!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi pmait,
I am so flattered by your fabulous comments and exceptional six star review. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Kaydoe
This is a very well written poem and nicely expresses your thoughts of hope,
even though I have a very different view of hope. The repetitive verse ties things nicely together.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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This is a very well written poem and nicely expresses your thoughts of hope,
even though I have a very different view of hope. The repetitive verse ties things nicely together.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Kaydoe. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm not at all familiar with the Villanelle format, although I have read "Do not go Gentle into that Good Night", by Dylan Thomas.
Based on your extensive and informative author's notes, and what I surmised in reading your version of the Villanelle form, you seem to have complied perfectly to the restrictions and adhered to the structure this form implements.
Well done, and I wish you the very best of luck in the voting.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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I'm not at all familiar with the Villanelle format, although I have read "Do not go Gentle into that Good Night", by Dylan Thomas.
Based on your extensive and informative author's notes, and what I surmised in reading your version of the Villanelle form, you seem to have complied perfectly to the restrictions and adhered to the structure this form implements.
Well done, and I wish you the very best of luck in the voting.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Dean. I appreciate the kind observations.
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