Help me Trust You More
A prayer of trust6 total reviews
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Love it, spirit and rhyming couplets. And, I agree if I knew the plan, I'd oft fear to tread; where it is when I fall and have nothing else to hang on to, I find God there. And, so I grow anew and my life unfolds its higher meaning outside the little vision, choices or worldly dreams and relationships of comfort. Well done, enjoy your journey, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Love it, spirit and rhyming couplets. And, I agree if I knew the plan, I'd oft fear to tread; where it is when I fall and have nothing else to hang on to, I find God there. And, so I grow anew and my life unfolds its higher meaning outside the little vision, choices or worldly dreams and relationships of comfort. Well done, enjoy your journey, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 19-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for the encouraging words and for the six star rating!! I appreciate your review so much.
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Blessings Belinda, and thank you for sharing your precious journey. Maureen*&*
Comment from foxangie123
Your baby is so very handsome and cute. A tub of love he is. Your poem reached out and grabbed me placing sweet kisses on my hurting soul. Thank you so much.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Your baby is so very handsome and cute. A tub of love he is. Your poem reached out and grabbed me placing sweet kisses on my hurting soul. Thank you so much.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for the encouragement! I truly appreciate the time you took to write this review.
Comment from ddmaewriting
I am echoing everything written in your poem. I find strength in God. In times of difficulties, I pray for strength and enlightenment to be able to fully entrust everything according to His will. Thanks for the share.
Technical note: "For its then I learn"- did you mean "For it's then I learn"? "it's is "it is" while its is either used as a possessive pronoun or possessive adjective.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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I am echoing everything written in your poem. I find strength in God. In times of difficulties, I pray for strength and enlightenment to be able to fully entrust everything according to His will. Thanks for the share.
Technical note: "For its then I learn"- did you mean "For it's then I learn"? "it's is "it is" while its is either used as a possessive pronoun or possessive adjective.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for your insight. I appreciate your review. The technical note is also appreciated and was an oversight I will correct. Thank you.
Comment from babyross
Lovely prayer poem for the Father. I can feel and relate to this write in many ways. The promises he made to us shall never be forgotten for he reigns, even for us stubborn children. He loves! Thanks for this.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Lovely prayer poem for the Father. I can feel and relate to this write in many ways. The promises he made to us shall never be forgotten for he reigns, even for us stubborn children. He loves! Thanks for this.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Absolutely true! I am a very stubborn child. Thank you so much for the encouragement and for the rating.
Comment from djeckert
This is filled with lits of honesty and wise things. It was a joy to read. I loved "I'm sure if I knew of all Your plans, I'd tire of seeking You.
'Tis best I whine, complain, then seek an errant trail or two. Awesone . God Bless
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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This is filled with lits of honesty and wise things. It was a joy to read. I loved "I'm sure if I knew of all Your plans, I'd tire of seeking You.
'Tis best I whine, complain, then seek an errant trail or two. Awesone . God Bless
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for the inspirational review! I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from zekeziemann
A poem that is very introspective and honest. Your trials and return to faith are explained well and give the reader a chance to do a little soul searching on him or herself.
I think the rhythm would be helpful to the reader if you would pay close attention to syllables in some (a very few) lines. Just a suggestion.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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A poem that is very introspective and honest. Your trials and return to faith are explained well and give the reader a chance to do a little soul searching on him or herself.
I think the rhythm would be helpful to the reader if you would pay close attention to syllables in some (a very few) lines. Just a suggestion.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for the encouragement and for the suggestion. I appreciate your review.
