Comment from pattipac

Excellent

LOL, you must be crazy over your girlfriend, Dean. I must say she has weird ways that would send any other Tom, Dick, or Harry running; her incisors, penchant for sucking, and formaldehyde perfume, for example.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Yeah, she ain't your average babe, that's for certain, Pattipac.
But she IS all mine, LOL.
Thanks for the fun review...

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Love or lust can make us blind to the obvious as in the case of this narrator. His "whatever" attitude I'm sure is influenced by the late night bedroom tumbles he takes with this strange girl. The bed probably reeks of formaldehyde.

It's a shame his lust/love blinds him to the fact that the moment she's bore or want to do something new her eyes will focus on him!!!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

That's where it falls upon his shoulders to ensure that she never gets bored, never needs or wants for anything, and never remains unsatisfied.
Isn't that what all men who care about and love their significant others do, or am I mistaken here?
Thanks for your comments, Muffins...

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Wow, what a gal. Great descriptions. All Dick wants is a sexy 'vamp' with sharp incisors, wandering the woods in her daisy dukes and smelling of formaldehyde. Of course she has to be a horror movie fiend ...

I see Gypsy responded to this. I love this back and forth.
'Dick' got a lot of play in both posts. lol

:) e

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Didn't he though, Ellen.
That Dick...he's quite the play'ah, heh-heh...
Thanks very much for checkin' it out...

reply by barkingdog on 20-Apr-2016

Great signature!!!

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

;)

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

She reminds me of a blind date I had once. Very well
done, Dean. I had a smile all the way through. Excellent
pace and rhyme. -Bill

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thanks, Bill. That was my hope when I wrote it, that it would make people smile.
I'm very happy it did for you.
~Dean :)

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

Hmmm - I didn't know that Gypsy Blue was such a horror aficionado. She is quite nice here on FS - but, she must be a terror in the woods. I'm sure Dick would agree that she might have anterior motives for getting him alone out there.
Great rhyming, and a bit of fun in a totally macabre sort of way. Nice use of word play throughout.
Rose.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Just because she loves and appreciates horror in no way makes her a bad person, Rose. In fact, she is one of the kindest, most generous members on this entire site, I feel.
Our passions for literature--the genres in which they are categorized--in no way defines who we are as individuals. If I like you and consider you a friend, I'll give you my last dime if you need it much more than I do. I like to be the life of the party, to make people laugh and let down their inhibitions just a bit. But I also happen to love horror, and everything about it.

Thank you for your comments.
Enjoy your day...
~Dean :}

reply by Just2Write on 19-Apr-2016

Gosh - I was not implying that any one is a 'bad' person. Far from it - but the gal in the daisy dukes with a back-full of gore and misery might not be well loved by some.
I meant no disrespect to anyone that's actually alive.
I was only looking at the poem, and not at the person.
I am a lover, not a fighter.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Kind of kinky poem about this bad bad girlfriend. Definitely don't think that she's my type though. I'll try to stay out of her woods while out on a hike.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Yeah, I would most definitely advise that you do that, Tom.
Thanks for the comments...
~Dean

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Those bad, bad girls can be so, so, very, very good, especially when they are at their very worst. Thanks for another of your fine poem and picture combination. Makes a fellow want to sneak a little pinch. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Thanks for checking her out, Ric. U-h-h-h, I meant the poem, of course.
Much obliged.
~Dean ;}

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Your story line is interesting as is the music to build our expectations. Your sense of humor is soundly built-in to a raucous display of sexuality.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Thanks for checking her out, Alan.
U-h-h-h, I meant the poem, of course.
Much obliged.
~Dean ;}

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OTFLMAO...you...wanted to read one more...you are killing me Dean...this is hilarious...well you sound perfect for each other...I am so glad you found the real deal...your rhythm and rhyme are awesome...so very well written you nut...goodnight...smiling big...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Well, at least I sent you to bed with a smile on your face instead of a shiver goin' up and down your spine.
of course that can be a good thing to under the right circumstances, heh-heh...
Goodnight, Linda.
Sweet dreams...
~Dean :}

reply by l.raven on 20-Apr-2016

yes it did put a smile on my face...but I love those chills...LOL...love Linda xxoo

Comment from JTStone

Excellent

Okay, if I don't use genius to describe your work, can I still say--entertaining?
Because you're a genius when it comes to putting your entertainment together. Poems are just a bonus.
Jimmy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016

Hahaha, sure, Jimmy. Entertaining sounds great.
That's really all i try to do, make the things I write a bit different and entertaining.
Sometimes I'm successful while other times I can hardly get anyone to go to my portfolio and read anything I've written unless my name's on it.
I often wonder about that...
Thank YOU for reading this.
~Dean