Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, there is one in every family. Good job on the rhyme, smooth flow, and good message. You explained your self well.

The picture is perfect. Good job on alliteration, too.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is an excellent poem, Debra The meter and rhyme are really good. This slows so well it is a very pleasant read. Stick to your guns, my friend

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your poems always take a timely bent, relating to current events in your life. I like that kind of personalized content. Excellent rhyming with a good message. Marilyn

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

And probably from someone that has no children.lol
Very good rant and I remember trying to help my daughter raise her kids...oh the fights and it was not worth it.
I learned to back off

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016