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Story telling poems

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Comment from DonandVicki
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You have given a voice to this legend of an Owl. Well constructed story and fun to read, I wish you all the luck in this contest. DonandVicki

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    thank you, so much, I think I have work to do on this story, but the write was fun
Comment from damommy
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This is one of the best things I've read in a long time.

Absolutely wonderful!

The way you wrote, I could see the Indian telling his grandchildren, and also I could hear Owl when he spoke.

Very good writing. 8-)

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much. I enjoy these challenges and see myself in them all the time.