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To Last Forever

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Poems by Michael

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Comment from Joan E.
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What an eye-catching title and its repeat, along with the artwork! I particularly liked your exhortation to "orchestrate like Mozart" and your circularity with the "stopwatch" metaphor. Here's to being alive!! Hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016
    Good morning J...-smile-
    land sake I'll say life is a Mozart in the making.
    come orchestrate a melody....big love Michael
Comment from Nika2016
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Skin for kin? Oh yeah..that is a Scots-Irish word...You and your bro..Cahill are writing some dark poetry...you are pulling the wings off of butterflies shaded blue? Beautiful paradise..lost? Love is choice freely given without duress...or its not love..its something else. Where is love in your equation?

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    I need the tax paperwork back...and I aint playing.
    other than that....I got nothing for ya...in poetry or anywhere else.
reply by Nika2016 on 12-Apr-2016
    Seriously...have no idea what you are talking about...I think I will go offline for awhile. Just stopped by to say its getting darker on the site ...for everyone.
Comment from amada
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Nice what you say in here, Michael..."live a wish where each inside screams soul outlandish I'm alive... What more can i say. I am still in mourning for a departed one so these lines mean a lot to me.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    Happy...-smile-
    I am too...then.
    we mourn what we miss. Do you know why I know there's a God...No way you...or him just happened. How can so beautiful be created accidently...? the time you had lives forever. you loved him and he loved it...you. What happened was not your fault and he holds no blame. He waits for you and when you remember him , he wants you to smile. Big love makes Happy. love you michael
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Reconciled: interesting videos. I watched several. Stop watch, you were created for love. Create your own Mozart with your God given gifts and talents. Use your time to help others in your stop watch. Jump for joy and gain strength in the word of life.
You are a great writer and makes us think. Brooke liked reading your poems. Stop by my site anytime. God bless! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    Hi...-smile-
    ah even Jesus couldn't get audience hometown....
    I write to relax now...once I was going to change the world...but recruitment kicked my butt. It takes more than one Forrest Gump to ah march on...ward...you need a following. and I'm not real "pc" I don't believe in any of em' so there ya go.
    why thank you for saying that...it is my hope one day "students" all over the world will study the genius of Michael James...will see. love Michael
Comment from c_lucas
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The stop watch is a misnomer because time cannot be stopped. This is very well written with a compelling flow of words, making for a very read.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    if a missile fired from a urban rocket launcher was getting bigger and bigger in your face...would you say that...or duck...?
    ah haha...hey Charlie...-smile- "making for a very read" is what I'm all about man. it comes natural...-wink- love michael