Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Ill Equipped to Entertain"NaPoWriMo April 2016
17 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
I thought you did an excellent job of writing considering you said you'd pass for today lol! This is very sweet with a cute picture. Nice rhyming that ties it up with a red ribbon. If this is how you write when you're uninspired, then I hope to see more just like this.
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I thought you did an excellent job of writing considering you said you'd pass for today lol! This is very sweet with a cute picture. Nice rhyming that ties it up with a red ribbon. If this is how you write when you're uninspired, then I hope to see more just like this.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I've reviewed so much the past 12 days, I am beginning to feel that way too. I may have to give my brain a break soon. This is a cute poem so you muse must not be too far away, my friend~Debbie
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I've reviewed so much the past 12 days, I am beginning to feel that way too. I may have to give my brain a break soon. This is a cute poem so you muse must not be too far away, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
Comment from Slythytove2
I love your little poem with the mouse. I supposed to say something pithy here to fill up the space and look like I'm giving you sage advice, but I can't think of a thing to say.
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I love your little poem with the mouse. I supposed to say something pithy here to fill up the space and look like I'm giving you sage advice, but I can't think of a thing to say.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose is very cute
Even though I don't care for mice
It is a perfect match for your poem.
When I have days like that I say It's time to rest my brain and send so time with the lord. Soon He will replenish my mind in-fact it's works over time.
Slow your roll relaxes.
Cookie
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The artwork you choose is very cute
Even though I don't care for mice
It is a perfect match for your poem.
When I have days like that I say It's time to rest my brain and send so time with the lord. Soon He will replenish my mind in-fact it's works over time.
Slow your roll relaxes.
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
Comment from Lulube
Nothing to say but what's on your mind at the time. That's how I work as well. I wish I could come up with sultry, romantic poems or horror poems, well anything but my life poems, would
be special. Mind you if you write on something that happened during the day, or something said, wth your family you should not run out of something to pick up on.
Love the way you can rhyme saying you can't write about anything.
Here's a topic for you, Write on your favorite color. You can take that anywhere.
It's the 12th keep on keepiin on
lulube
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Nothing to say but what's on your mind at the time. That's how I work as well. I wish I could come up with sultry, romantic poems or horror poems, well anything but my life poems, would
be special. Mind you if you write on something that happened during the day, or something said, wth your family you should not run out of something to pick up on.
Love the way you can rhyme saying you can't write about anything.
Here's a topic for you, Write on your favorite color. You can take that anywhere.
It's the 12th keep on keepiin on
lulube
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
Comment from MacMhuirich
LOL, with nothing to say you've given us a cute write for your poem a day. You don't look tired in your selfie and I think you might need to trim your nails :) Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
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LOL, with nothing to say you've given us a cute write for your poem a day. You don't look tired in your selfie and I think you might need to trim your nails :) Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
Comment from lightink
LOL! You sweet little liar! You said you weren't about to entertain us, but you did! Such a cute, well metered poem that proves that sometimes saying little is more than enough! Goodnight!
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LOL! You sweet little liar! You said you weren't about to entertain us, but you did! Such a cute, well metered poem that proves that sometimes saying little is more than enough! Goodnight!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
finally something I can understand and relate to.
I feel much better. I laughed and you have to understand that you made my day.
Nice rhyme and flow
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finally something I can understand and relate to.
I feel much better. I laughed and you have to understand that you made my day.
Nice rhyme and flow
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debra:
We've got a shared existence going here lol I felt the same way yesterday! I did a bunch of reading and then couldn't wrap my mind around anything substantial. Finally, I decided that sleep was the best route to take. I feel much more focused today lol
Thanks for stating what I was thinking in perfect rhyme.
Kim
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Hi Debra:
We've got a shared existence going here lol I felt the same way yesterday! I did a bunch of reading and then couldn't wrap my mind around anything substantial. Finally, I decided that sleep was the best route to take. I feel much more focused today lol
Thanks for stating what I was thinking in perfect rhyme.
Kim
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Please tell that space 'thank you' for a fun poem. The artwork is really cute and very fitting.
I enjoyed your poem. It has great rhyme and rhythm, too.
Good job and thanks for sharing.
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Please tell that space 'thank you' for a fun poem. The artwork is really cute and very fitting.
I enjoyed your poem. It has great rhyme and rhythm, too.
Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
