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Comment from frogbook
Wow that was very well sad in all of it's sad truth and hurting. I especially loved the last lines which were a very fitting conclusion.
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Wow that was very well sad in all of it's sad truth and hurting. I especially loved the last lines which were a very fitting conclusion.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Thank you , I learned life the hard way but now it is wonderful.
Comment from Douglas Paul
I love the format you used in this poem, Judy. It makes your words more powerful, I think. This is a thought-provoking piece. Very well done, my friend
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I love the format you used in this poem, Judy. It makes your words more powerful, I think. This is a thought-provoking piece. Very well done, my friend
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Thank you , I appreciate your words so much.
