Little Poems
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Comment from RodG
An interesting format which is perfect for your topic.
Good description and critique of the bus stop in your tercel.
Thanks also for the explanatory author's notes.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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An interesting format which is perfect for your topic.
Good description and critique of the bus stop in your tercel.
Thanks also for the explanatory author's notes.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you RodG. Glad you liked it.
Comment from wilkswrites
Very short and to the point. I enjoyed your poem and the picture sets the setting very well. I wish there were bus stops like that in NY and other busy cities. Looks like a real good idea. Your poem actually says that, and I agree.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Very short and to the point. I enjoyed your poem and the picture sets the setting very well. I wish there were bus stops like that in NY and other busy cities. Looks like a real good idea. Your poem actually says that, and I agree.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you veils. I appreciate the review and stars. And having lived in New York, I know what you mean.
