Comment from amada

Excellent

I think this is the first time I read a three lines work from you, Bob. I like the note of irony in "nothing but lost pride." I wish you well in the contest

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Nancy. I rreally have written a lot of poetry...see my port. I just got wrapped up in novel writing for a long time now. Blessings. Bob

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Oh, well done Bob, you managed to infuse some irony and humour into this short poem which is quite definitely a bit of a yawn, I think you'd agree. I guess they do get short on imagination at times, and I can understand the invention of this competition. Giddy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Giddy. I just figured...oh...what the hell...why not. LOL...Bob

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Well, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet, as I'm sure you have probably heard me say. I can't say that I've ever seen you write or enter a poetry contest, but it's ways nice to read those of which I'm a fan expanding their knowledge. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks a lot, Don. LOL...As if I had nothing better to do, ya know? Bob

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Hi, Bob

I think you came up with an excellent response to Judi's writing prompt. She was tired of all the same old contests, etc.

I'm glad you took up the baton and offered this clever entry.

Good luck!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Hi, Bev. Thanks a lot. LOL...Nothing better to do...right? NOT. btw...This is not Judi's it is from Domino 2...whoever that is. :) Bob

reply by Writingfundimension on 10-Apr-2016

Oh, Judi wrote a poem about it, and I was under the impression she'd sponsored it. Domino seems to win a fair number of poetry contests from what I've seen.

Have a good week, Bob!

:) Bev

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

U 2, Bev. X Bob

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This contest is a true challenge. I think you have done a great job describing a lack of poetic imagination perfectly. Very nice work with this one and I sincerely wish you all the best in the contest too.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Hi, Sasha. How are you doing with everythoing, my friend? I hope things are getting better. Yeah, I figured what the hay. For five bucks...why not. LOL...Thanks so much for your time and wishes. Bob

Comment from dragonpoet

Good

For the first poem I have seen by you, this tells that it is hard to go outside your comfort zone.

I have written two short stories and know I won't stay sane if I tried to write a novel.

I think they are on this site as Broken Ties and Goodbyes.

Good luck in the contest and keep writing.


Joan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks, Joan. Actually, I have written a lot of poetry on this site...Even won a few contests. (all in my portfolio) I haven't in a very long time thoughbecause novel writing has become my thing, I guess. Bless you, my friend. Bob

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Apr-2016

You're welcome. I will look up your other poetic works then.

Joan

reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

Thankyou. :) Bob

Comment from alleewin

Exceptional

I don't understand poetry at all, but I am trying.
I think you have met all of the requirements.
It must be in your realm and I doubt If pride would hinder you,
so I have to say "Well done," and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Hi, Win! How nice of you to give me a six for this entry. I cannot remember when I last wrote poetry although I have a lot I did do in my portfolio on here. Take a peek sometime please because in no way do I like to claim this as my poetic mind. LOL..It's just that they wanted something like this. Go figure, my friend. Bless you. Bob

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Glad you jumped into the fray. I have lost my pride several times, losing more than winning. I always say I won't do it again, but I invariably give in. Excellent three line take on the subject. I really wasn't sure exactly what was expected of those entering this contest. You have your 5-7-5 syllable count, anyway! Best of luck with this venture. judi

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Hi, Judi. I remember you had an entry I reviewed, now that I think of it. Thanks so much and good luck to you too. Bob

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thank you so much, Charlie. Been a long time since I entered any contest. Bob

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

I'm not sure if the yawn or the haiku is well out of your realm but from the construction of the poem it's not out of your realm. As for nothing to lose but pride, that's true whenever writers make their words public. I don't think you have lost any pride with this poem.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Awww. Thanks so much, Mary. I used towrite a lot of poetry (see my port) but gave it up pretty much when I stasrted getting so involved with novels. I sincerely appreciate your kind compliments. Bob