Comment from Sharon Gibson

Excellent

Beautiful tribute to your son!
The way you used the snow coming seem to symbolize the winter struggle of giving birth.
Then the way you used spring as a background and a way to express the joy of a birth of a new son.
I liked the way you expressed the way your spirit connect with him.
How fun that you saw that Robin as a symbol celebrating the birth of your son!
The poem left me with a warm feeling. :-)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. He is such a joy and I celebrate his twenty fifth birthday. Thank you for your thoughtful words.

Comment from Jude1938

Good

This is a lovely poem celebrating a lovely event. I enjoyed the picture you painted of the winter's stillness and the joy of looking into your newborn son's eyes.

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you . I just wanted to share.

Comment from edieas

Excellent

I hope Mathew had a lovely day for his birthday. Bet you are just as proud as ever. Your poem was so sweet and tender. Congrats to you! edieas

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

He is a joy.