Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Friday the Eighth?"NaPoWriMo April 2016
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Comment from BeasPeas
Oh, good one, Debra. Short and sweet, BUT you have conveyed the feeling of your day in three short lines. Love the artwork to accompany. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Oh, good one, Debra. Short and sweet, BUT you have conveyed the feeling of your day in three short lines. Love the artwork to accompany. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Cheers Marilyn :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. I always feel like I'm cheating or copping out when I write 5-7-5s!
Kindest regards, Debra x
Comment from Lulube
Bit of a tongue twister that middle line, try this one Today really should've been or I could have sworn that it was
There are so many of those days eh?
lulube
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Bit of a tongue twister that middle line, try this one Today really should've been or I could have sworn that it was
There are so many of those days eh?
lulube
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Yup, way too many! Thanks for the feedback lulube :)
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Leineco
What??? You leave us hanging here???
I'm sorry the day was a series of trials :-( I hope a (?) good night's
sleep helped a little.
You certainly sent my mind reeling through possibilities :-(
Hopefully you will assure me hubby and kids are okay, and that the
events were a concoction of mishaps - not catastrophes.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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What??? You leave us hanging here???
I'm sorry the day was a series of trials :-( I hope a (?) good night's
sleep helped a little.
You certainly sent my mind reeling through possibilities :-(
Hopefully you will assure me hubby and kids are okay, and that the
events were a concoction of mishaps - not catastrophes.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hey Lorraine :)
Thanks for caring and for the great feedback. I'm ok... Just a bad day, not really for me, but I hate being unable to put things right for those I care about... The nicest people get the hardest knocks :(
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from misscookie
I The artwork that you choose to go with your poem
Is a perfect match.
I had to smile after thread. For this stuff I don't believe.
I think if I went by my life experiences there were more bad days, and not on the thirteenth
Take care.
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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I The artwork that you choose to go with your poem
Is a perfect match.
I had to smile after thread. For this stuff I don't believe.
I think if I went by my life experiences there were more bad days, and not on the thirteenth
Take care.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Thank you, miss cookie, for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra x
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Your very welcome. I'm trying to get away from the computer then I same six reply's after this I'm going to stop.
Cookie
Comment from lightink
I'm sorry! Without knowing the details, let me send you some love! The poem still has a bit of your subtle humor which gives me a little hope though...
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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I'm sorry! Without knowing the details, let me send you some love! The poem still has a bit of your subtle humor which gives me a little hope though...
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Aw, thank you, J :) Love is always warmly received here! Thank you for your lovely comments :) love Debra x
Comment from Slythytove2
Don't know whether or not you got my last message I messes up and lost my critique (yup- the whole damn thing- gone just like that) of the poem before this. I also asked if maybe you might consider giving your e-mail address to make things easier. I won't be hurt if you decline- I know about fraud and identity theft. I have to pay some YAHO from India 300.00 every three years just so he won't lock down my desk top totally.Which he can do. I don't know how. The only thing I can do with my computer is call the number. He calls me Grandpa now. I've even tried unplugging but to no avail.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Don't know whether or not you got my last message I messes up and lost my critique (yup- the whole damn thing- gone just like that) of the poem before this. I also asked if maybe you might consider giving your e-mail address to make things easier. I won't be hurt if you decline- I know about fraud and identity theft. I have to pay some YAHO from India 300.00 every three years just so he won't lock down my desk top totally.Which he can do. I don't know how. The only thing I can do with my computer is call the number. He calls me Grandpa now. I've even tried unplugging but to no avail.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi chuck, thank you for your patience! I received your feedback, but unfortunately your original message did appear to have gone astray...:( I'm struggling to keep up with things on here at the moment, things really hectic in real life! Will respond to your kind offer asap. Best wishes, Debra :)
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I'll wait till things settle down, then I'll go back over the critique if I can find it. In the mean time go get that note book I mentioned and start your word groupings. here's one you can relate to- "autistic conversations".
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
LOL at the date thing--not at your misfortune.
Your few lines express your thoughts well.
The picture is perfect. Good job and thanks for sharing.
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LOL at the date thing--not at your misfortune.
Your few lines express your thoughts well.
The picture is perfect. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Cheers Jan :) I really appreciate your feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
You must have had a difficult day a take it Debra, otherwise why else would you be talking of Friday as the thirteenth my frien, however you have chosen the right day to post here, it's Friday in the northern associated countries, well done, hope you recover, blessings, Roy
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You must have had a difficult day a take it Debra, otherwise why else would you be talking of Friday as the thirteenth my frien, however you have chosen the right day to post here, it's Friday in the northern associated countries, well done, hope you recover, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from Douglas Paul
Ahhh there are days like that for sure. Persevere and endure is all you can do sometimes. Hope things improve for you tomorrow, Debra
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Ahhh there are days like that for sure. Persevere and endure is all you can do sometimes. Hope things improve for you tomorrow, Debra
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
