Comment from darkmoonbaby

Excellent

This is a well written piece, very enjoyable to read. I saw no errors or mistakes, no typos. Nothing at all that I would change. Good luck

DMB

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2016

Thank you dark, for your kind review. Most appreciated... ~Mel~

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

I want to compliment you on a wonderful write enabling us to enjoy the wonderful read. Your description of the beautiful islands made me want to call my travel consultant. What a nice story with a fairy tale end. Thanks for Sharing. May God Bless You.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2016

Thank you so much Dr. Nad, for your kind enthusiastic review. Much appreciated... ~Mel~

reply by Dr. Nad on 08-Apr-2016

You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!