Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Only Way is Up"NaPoWriMo April 2016
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Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent, Debra. I enjoyed reading your well composed poem of your morning jog in the rain. Great rhyming, pace and flow. Despite your difficulties in the rain, you wrote a positive poem. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Excellent, Debra. I enjoyed reading your well composed poem of your morning jog in the rain. Great rhyming, pace and flow. Despite your difficulties in the rain, you wrote a positive poem. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi Marilyn :) Thank you for your great feedback... I have to admit, I think I've caught the running bug!
Best Wishes, Debra x
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Sounds like a delightful morning. I do hope you got some groceries to fill those empty cupboards or tomorrow may be even worse, LOL. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Sounds like a delightful morning. I do hope you got some groceries to fill those empty cupboards or tomorrow may be even worse, LOL. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi Debbie :) thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from misscookie
I like the are work that you choose to go with your poem
I had to smile for I thought Of a verse I read the other day
Lord don't move the mountain, help me to climb it.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I like the are work that you choose to go with your poem
I had to smile for I thought Of a verse I read the other day
Lord don't move the mountain, help me to climb it.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from Joy Graham
I live at the top of a hefty hill too. I usually try to walk on the flat part, because the hill up is a killer. We have a lovely natural park close by. I avoid the extreme hill climbs, but can't avoid them all. Not sure I'd go walking in the rain. I have to give you credit for doing that.
Sorry to hear your cupboards are bare. I'd invite you here to share my oreo cookies, but I bet you're a healthy eater.
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I live at the top of a hefty hill too. I usually try to walk on the flat part, because the hill up is a killer. We have a lovely natural park close by. I avoid the extreme hill climbs, but can't avoid them all. Not sure I'd go walking in the rain. I have to give you credit for doing that.
Sorry to hear your cupboards are bare. I'd invite you here to share my oreo cookies, but I bet you're a healthy eater.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from Domino 2
The only 'morning run' I get, is from my nose, Debs, though that's nothing to boast about, and I much admire your determination to satay fit - as all women should to attract us males. HAHAHA!
Unusually for you, the meter falters in last line, IMO, but that's not the end of the world, and I much enjoyed the poem.
Cheers, Ray xx
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The only 'morning run' I get, is from my nose, Debs, though that's nothing to boast about, and I much admire your determination to satay fit - as all women should to attract us males. HAHAHA!
Unusually for you, the meter falters in last line, IMO, but that's not the end of the world, and I much enjoyed the poem.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from MacMhuirich
Well done my friend, against all the elements you made it up the hill, next time, stop at the local Spar shop and do some shopping, that'll test your resolve to get home. Thank you for sharing your poem a day.
Bless you
John
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Well done my friend, against all the elements you made it up the hill, next time, stop at the local Spar shop and do some shopping, that'll test your resolve to get home. Thank you for sharing your poem a day.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from lightink
Oh no! No breakfast at the end? That's the worst part!
But look at how determined you are - jogging in the rain! Wow!
You misunderstood the rainy weather though: it wasn't against you, it was just trying to water-cool your overheated aching body ;)!
This poem is a sweet little lament, but I bet you were pretty proud of yourself at the end :)!
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Oh no! No breakfast at the end? That's the worst part!
But look at how determined you are - jogging in the rain! Wow!
You misunderstood the rainy weather though: it wasn't against you, it was just trying to water-cool your overheated aching body ;)!
This poem is a sweet little lament, but I bet you were pretty proud of yourself at the end :)!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL reminded me of the story of the boy who walked to school and it was uphill all the way.
cute and nicely done. Laughed at the way it made sense
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LOL reminded me of the story of the boy who walked to school and it was uphill all the way.
cute and nicely done. Laughed at the way it made sense
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from Leineco
What???? No cinnamon cakes or hot cross buns in the
cupboard to reward your efforts??? I don't think I like
your version of the morning workout! (LOL)
(Also. . .I'd run circles around the top! Ending at the
bottom of a hill would mean I won't be home till
my husband comes home from work and picks
me up on the way home!!! LMAO)
well rhymed and metered Deb :-)
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What???? No cinnamon cakes or hot cross buns in the
cupboard to reward your efforts??? I don't think I like
your version of the morning workout! (LOL)
(Also. . .I'd run circles around the top! Ending at the
bottom of a hill would mean I won't be home till
my husband comes home from work and picks
me up on the way home!!! LMAO)
well rhymed and metered Deb :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
Comment from MelB
Nice abab rhyme and flow. The artwork goes well with this piece. I would much rather walk, but I admire those who run. I agree, running up a hill is not fun, especially in the rain.
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Nice abab rhyme and flow. The artwork goes well with this piece. I would much rather walk, but I admire those who run. I agree, running up a hill is not fun, especially in the rain.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
