Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A beautiful Quatern. A daily walk is good exercise and it cleanse the mind from unwanted thoughts and help for inspiration. An excellent photograph as well.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you Sandra.

Comment from EClay

Excellent

I appreciate the explanations and examples you provide of various forms for poems. Interesting rhyme scheme for this poem. Walking being pretty much my favorite daily activity, and poetry my favorite way to use words, I very much like this poem. I also use my walks to get my poems moving; I'm glad to hear that someone such as yourself does, too.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you EClay. I find there is inspiration everywhere.

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A simple little walk that you have turned
into an artistic adventure, telling your
tale in poetically dancing words as
you walk across the bridge.
Well done

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you fastdigits, I like how you out that.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I so missed reading your work while being in the hospital because it is excellent writing okay. The pictures down to every line. If there is gonna be kloaning they can start right with you....

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you foxangie, you make me smile.

reply by foxangie123 on 04-Apr-2016

I'm glad but know it is the truth I speak Hun..

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

It's good for you to go out for a lively, daily walk, along with the daily (?) writing of verses. It's got to be the easiest type of exercise and one of the best for you - good for body, and soul too.
A very nice Quatern, which I actually have not tried - although I have produced a few pantoums and even a villanelle awhile back. Well done!
Carol

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you Carol. I am enjoying it, and losing weight too.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I think you have inspired me to get back out in the morning to go for a walk. It gets your blood pumping and you will feel more invigorated for the day.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you DonandVicki. That would be awesome. I'm peased if it inspired you to get out walking too.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I must try this concept. You make it look and sound so easy. Love the photo. Very soft rhythm. I find no fault. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you very much Ben.

Comment from lightink

Excellent

I love walk so much! When I lived in San Francisco, I often opted for an hour walk uphill instead of a bus ride!
Your poem shows the joy of walking - as exercise, exploration a way to connect and gather inspiration! Everything I love about it...
My favorite line is:
"We love the images that they unlock."
You make me want to go for a walk right now! :)


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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

Thank you Jyoti. That pleases me very much.