To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Poetry of the..."Poems by Michael
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Comment from daeneam
Hello, dear Michael! Still remember me? I suddenly miss Fanstory... my precious friends like you... the additional insights I gain in life through reading and most of all, the beauty of the mind of people like you.
I miss you! I hope you're in the best shape. c", Mae
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hello, dear Michael! Still remember me? I suddenly miss Fanstory... my precious friends like you... the additional insights I gain in life through reading and most of all, the beauty of the mind of people like you.
I miss you! I hope you're in the best shape. c", Mae
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hello Professor Beautiful....-smile-
I've missed you you know...-headtilt-
ah I'm ever ready...Mae Mae....I'm the bunny that just keeps beaten the drum. Hope youre well...love you Michael
Comment from Joan E.
You selected an amazing, black-and-white photograph to establish the mood for your poem. I admired the "war horse/stallion" image and the reference to the "bear/grizzly" echoing back to the picture. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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You selected an amazing, black-and-white photograph to establish the mood for your poem. I admired the "war horse/stallion" image and the reference to the "bear/grizzly" echoing back to the picture. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hey J....-smile-
well thank you Dear.....I be Paul Reviering in your town soon.
giddy up lightening....miles to go before we sleep...miles to go....love Michael
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Really or just in your writing and imagination? I'll be in Kentucky just until the 11th. Have a happy and productive week- Joan
Comment from amada
Very soft and enigmatic...lovely, I love these lines the most "soft spoken unexpected... shushes wind breathless gentle as babies reach..." It makes me smile. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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Very soft and enigmatic...lovely, I love these lines the most "soft spoken unexpected... shushes wind breathless gentle as babies reach..." It makes me smile. :-)
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016
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Hey Happy...-smile-
how are you Dear...you still listening to the music...?
good...you make me smile when you do. thank you Beautiful...big love Michael
Comment from MizKat
Hi Michele,
I hope I spelled your name right. The picture you put up with your poem is kind of scary. Just one bite and the tiny, cute little girl would be an goner. To be truthful to you, I have a hard time understanding your poetry. That's what happens when ladies like me, I'll be 79 years old on the 29th of this month, become old and decrepit. LOL
Kat
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Hi Michele,
I hope I spelled your name right. The picture you put up with your poem is kind of scary. Just one bite and the tiny, cute little girl would be an goner. To be truthful to you, I have a hard time understanding your poetry. That's what happens when ladies like me, I'll be 79 years old on the 29th of this month, become old and decrepit. LOL
Kat
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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No mom that's my sister remember.....smile.....ah mom i do it on purpose....I'm in incoridgable .....have you ever listened to music and made it meaningful just to you......sometimes I listen to those Italian operas tell my story...love you michael
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Love you too Michele. I'll keep reading your work and saying things about it even if I'm wrong about it.
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Very funny mom....haha
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I'm glad I said something funny in what I wrote. Of course as soon as I send it on it's way I forget what I've said. Kat
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of a little girl and a black bear that complements your poem very well. You covered a lot of ground: wind, refugees. Loads of alliteration. Very original as your poems always are.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Excellent photo of a little girl and a black bear that complements your poem very well. You covered a lot of ground: wind, refugees. Loads of alliteration. Very original as your poems always are.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Hey Sis...-smile-
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sorry...I'm retarded...-shouldershrug-....as I was saying...thank you Dear....good to see you...hope you're doing better. love you Michael
Comment from michaelcahill
Glad to see you decided to join the cool kids and it's only fitting you being one of the OG cool kids yourself.
Cool piece using the wind to great affect and awesome spiritual overtones that are right on point for any civilization, ancient or modern I think. Welcome to the party. You're on the list. :)) mikey
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Glad to see you decided to join the cool kids and it's only fitting you being one of the OG cool kids yourself.
Cool piece using the wind to great affect and awesome spiritual overtones that are right on point for any civilization, ancient or modern I think. Welcome to the party. You're on the list. :)) mikey
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Ha.....well thank you for the welcome marshal Cahill. It's shame Monique doesn't feel the same.......somebody should get her a physician in my professional opinion. But hey crazes cool too.....so long as she's not aiming at you.....-frown-..,,,.love YA man
Comment from Jean Lutz
Cascading words nourish the soul. The innocence of a child -- the power to tame the beast. Stirs the knowledge of things unseen that surround us. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Cascading words nourish the soul. The innocence of a child -- the power to tame the beast. Stirs the knowledge of things unseen that surround us. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Hi Jean...-smile-
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yea...i did it again...-headshake-...Anyway...thank you Maam....you've made me very happy....love you Michael
Comment from royowen
I must admit Michael this is more obscure than the recent ones, the only pictures I get are environmental issues, the artwork is particularly cute, other issues are the refugee situation and the presidential election, and the worry that Trump might be actually elected, well written my friend, and hi, Michael, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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I must admit Michael this is more obscure than the recent ones, the only pictures I get are environmental issues, the artwork is particularly cute, other issues are the refugee situation and the presidential election, and the worry that Trump might be actually elected, well written my friend, and hi, Michael, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Hey Roy...-smile-....yea I know...its ah its got the wind in it...and ...who can describe her huh...?...haha...ah been working my flat ass off....havent had a lot of time to sink....so oh yea...I wrote this in three seconds flat...so...ya know....lol...just playing. thank you sir. love michael
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Well done Michael,
Comment from c_lucas
Your image truly attracts one's attention. I could not free my mind from it as I read your poem. Your post is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Your image truly attracts one's attention. I could not free my mind from it as I read your poem. Your post is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Hey charlie...-smile-....yea it started happening to me too...about four years ago or so....I write one of these damn things , then stay up all night tweakin'....is it normal Charlie...? haha love Michael
Comment from MoniqueMarie
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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thats right...........and.......fffffffffart......excuse me-
