Comment from C.J. 16

Excellent

Judy, this is a really nice free verse poem for the contest. I love the message in this poem. Good luck and best wishes.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016

Wow, thank you so much, I think judging ourselves is the worst thing we do to ourselves. We are wonderful.

reply by C.J. 16 on 02-Apr-2016

Yes, I agree. Enjoy the rest of the weekend.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi jusylee.
A very nice poem. How many of us under estimate our own worth and never question it.
We just assume what we think others see is right.
A nice subject.
Brenda

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I truly think we need to enjoy who we are and quit judging ourselves.

reply by brenda bickers on 02-Apr-2016

You are so right, I have done that for 45 yrs and now I am just me and I am having the best time of my life. Take me or leave me. lol

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Judy. Very nice poem here. Well done and heartwarming from beginning to end.

I liked these lines in particular:

"It might have been
the day you were born
and you saw your mother's eyes"

Blessings, Good job. Bob

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. I am still searching for the right picture. Is there a trick to finding them the search in fan art only takes one word . I wanted to put mother and babies? Am I doing something wrong when i look for pictures.

reply by Mastery on 02-Apr-2016

No. You are doing fine..Just shorten it up to "Mothers" or Babies" or "newborns" or somehting like that You might have to put in something like "women" believe it or not. LOL...Bob (If you have a long project like a book where you will be postingm new chapters all the time...go to Dean Kuch. He will help and he ism very talented...charges nothing. (a member on this site) Hope this helps. Bob

reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016

Thank you so much.