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Story telling poems

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Comment from RodG
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I have heard of bad cooks, but burning jello is a new low.
This was fun to read, and I think any novice cook could relate.
Pride yourself in knowing you Earle a good poet.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much, Sometimes we just have to laugh at ourselves
Comment from RYME4U
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This is well written and very amusing. I am another one of those who can't cook....Thank goodness my husband can though.I like the funny way you have presented this poem and the rhyme and rhythm are smooth and even.Good job!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much, The sad thing is that all those things really happened. My husband cooks tool
reply by RYME4U on 01-Apr-2016
    My son told me that I could cook "The best cornflakes" he evr tasted when he was young.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A well written humor poem. To burn the jello is really a testimony of a poor cook that tried her best but just can't get it right. The earth quake cake can go through as a new trend. Lol.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
    Thank you and everything in this story is true.
Comment from foxangie123
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This is so very funny and it put a huge smile on my face. It was of the most enjoyment. I will be there when voting time comes. Keep writing like this. You Rock...

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much. The problem is it's true. Oh heavens.