Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Prologue "NaPoWriMo Challenge: Prologue"NaPoWriMo April 2016
24 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
That's a great start for your book, and I wish you the best of luck in the endeavor. We all know about losing our train of thought, etc. Evi
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That's a great start for your book, and I wish you the best of luck in the endeavor. We all know about losing our train of thought, etc. Evi
Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Where did you learn about dorsimbra if I may ask. I just learned of them myself. I think in your blankverse, I think I'll and scribe both have a long I sound and probably should not be used together. Otherwise, great job with this complex form, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Where did you learn about dorsimbra if I may ask. I just learned of them myself. I think in your blankverse, I think I'll and scribe both have a long I sound and probably should not be used together. Otherwise, great job with this complex form, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Debbie :) There was a dorsimbra contest a couple of weeks or so since on here... I'd not heard of the format til then. I really like it! Thanks for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, Debra, loved the picture displayed and your poem, even though short, lets us know so much what to expect with the ones to come. Quite a contest, that takes a whole month. Though, know you will have fun with this unique book challenge.
God Bless, Caressa_08
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
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Oh, Debra, loved the picture displayed and your poem, even though short, lets us know so much what to expect with the ones to come. Quite a contest, that takes a whole month. Though, know you will have fun with this unique book challenge.
God Bless, Caressa_08
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
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Hi Caressa, thank you for your lovely feedback :)
I appreciate it!
Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Your Dorsimbra is written and presented so well. It describes your intent in a musing AND amusing fashion. It flows well and hold the reader's interest. I look forward to reading your NaPoWriMo poems. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Your Dorsimbra is written and presented so well. It describes your intent in a musing AND amusing fashion. It flows well and hold the reader's interest. I look forward to reading your NaPoWriMo poems. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hi Marilyn :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
.I love the expression on her face thinking what should she write next.
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
.I love the expression on her face thinking what should she write next.
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hi misscookie :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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You're very welcome, have a nice week end.
,Cookie
Comment from tfawcus
What a delightful poem to start you off on this adventure. Rather a splendid poetic form as well. Although it sounds like a bit of a mish-mash, it seems to come together rather well. That could just be because of your skilful handling of it, of course!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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What a delightful poem to start you off on this adventure. Rather a splendid poetic form as well. Although it sounds like a bit of a mish-mash, it seems to come together rather well. That could just be because of your skilful handling of it, of course!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hah! Thank you Tony ;) I appreciate your great feedback, glad you enjoyed the poem. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Lulube
lol WOW what a challenge, maybe when I first signed up but now I don't think I'd make it. and you with 3 kids. you go girl.
An excellent make-up for your first poem. It says it all. Love the style. Very much like I'd like to write in. Very good imagery. Easy read, great flow
lulube
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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lol WOW what a challenge, maybe when I first signed up but now I don't think I'd make it. and you with 3 kids. you go girl.
An excellent make-up for your first poem. It says it all. Love the style. Very much like I'd like to write in. Very good imagery. Easy read, great flow
lulube
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Ah thank you, Lulube :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. I'm determined to nail this poem a day for a month.... I'm sat up now - just published poem number 1 for 1st April and it's just turned 11pm - job done for day 1 LOL!
Best wishes, Debs x
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A great commitment for you, anyone for that matter. You do really good at those shorter ones so maybe you can knock off a week in one night just to give you a few days break. lol
7 mon. to go may have to be in Nov. now, Andy's aunt is coming from ? and he wants me to meet her as well.
Did I tell you they got engaged 1-2 weeks ago? sorry if I did. bragging.
lulube
Comment from Domino 2
A seemingly complicated form to me, Debs, and you prove your poetic skills and versatility in making an excellent job of it.
UGH! 'poem' written as ONE syllable - my pet hate!
APART from that, LOL.
Good luck with the project which should keep you motivated - something I need but couldn't be bothered with at the moment. ;-(
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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A seemingly complicated form to me, Debs, and you prove your poetic skills and versatility in making an excellent job of it.
UGH! 'poem' written as ONE syllable - my pet hate!
APART from that, LOL.
Good luck with the project which should keep you motivated - something I need but couldn't be bothered with at the moment. ;-(
Nice one.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hey Ray..... sorry to throw your pet hate into my po-em, but thank you for letting me off the hook! LOL
I appreciate your lovely feedback as always!
Best wishes, Debs x
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debra,
Already I am learning something new! I am so happy that you've joined us in NaPoWriMo. I had never heard of a Dorsimbra poem before. How creative and intriguing. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us the rest of the month.
Good luck and have fun!
Kim
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hi Debra,
Already I am learning something new! I am so happy that you've joined us in NaPoWriMo. I had never heard of a Dorsimbra poem before. How creative and intriguing. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us the rest of the month.
Good luck and have fun!
Kim
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Hi Kim :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, good luck wishes and also for sponsoring this challenging contest!
Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from MelB
Boy, do I understand about people walking in and interrupting the flow of writing. I wish I could do this daily challenge, but know that I can't with work and this busy time of year. Hope it goes well for you and that the kids give you time to write.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Boy, do I understand about people walking in and interrupting the flow of writing. I wish I could do this daily challenge, but know that I can't with work and this busy time of year. Hope it goes well for you and that the kids give you time to write.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016
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Me too Mel! thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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You're welcome:)
