Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I will have to admit that this tale really got my attention and the artwork that you used really pulled me into the story. Well composed poet.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thanks, DonandVicki. I'm glad to hear it.
Much obliged for the review.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

This poem is fantastic, it has the feel of ghoulish dread about it. Each verse is so perfectly written that it just flows. the rhythm and rhyming is spot on and the presentation is great. The green on black gives it that Halloween feel about it. This is very much in the vien of a writer on FS by the name of Dean Kuch, you should check him out sometime , he is awesome.
Good luck in yhe contest.
Brenda

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you, Brenda. I will be sure to do that.
Thanks you also for taking a look at my poem. I am very happy that you enjoyed it. ;}