To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Rosary "Poems by Michael
45 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five stars! Poem very spiritual and inspirational. Talks about having hope and engaging in good deeds. Nice! liberty justice
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Five stars! Poem very spiritual and inspirational. Talks about having hope and engaging in good deeds. Nice! liberty justice
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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thank you Liberty...-smile-...love to you...michael
Comment from Kaydoe
This is a well written poem. My favorite verse, "Sanctified holy place, Savior Christ someone safe". He is a safe place where one can find rest, even amongst the
difficulties of life.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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This is a well written poem. My favorite verse, "Sanctified holy place, Savior Christ someone safe". He is a safe place where one can find rest, even amongst the
difficulties of life.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2016
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yes...but there are souls God made for each other...I believe.
and to have and hold that kind of love..in humane form...count on dependable...always there no matter what. is...the treasure of life. Certainly worthy of prayer....-smile- thank you. love Michael
Comment from DR DIP
Really nice poem love the accompanying song I had never heard of her before.
Really nice non rhyming verse. 3 line verse? I like it I must try non rhyming verse one day. thanks for posting
dip
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Really nice poem love the accompanying song I had never heard of her before.
Really nice non rhyming verse. 3 line verse? I like it I must try non rhyming verse one day. thanks for posting
dip
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hey man...-smile-
yes Trixie...she's phenomenal. have not a clue why a major label has not let her bloom. If she had money behind her she'd be a Diva.
ah I dont look for rhyme...but usually employ it. I look for sound...how it sounds...read. does it taste good...sweet or sour...it has read in melodic, if not hypnotic sound. for it to take effect...other than...wish I wouldn't have...-smile-. anyway, thanks man. love to you...michael
Comment from nancyrabbrose
You have written a very interesting poem full of faithful remarks. The arrangement of your words seems a bit different and I like that. I can't quite say what that does for the poem, but it enhances it in some way that makes the poem unusual.
Are you a painter, as in oil painting or watercolor? It seems to me that you apply your words as an artist would put them stroke by stroke in order to obtain the right hue, the right shape, to create a lovely picture. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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You have written a very interesting poem full of faithful remarks. The arrangement of your words seems a bit different and I like that. I can't quite say what that does for the poem, but it enhances it in some way that makes the poem unusual.
Are you a painter, as in oil painting or watercolor? It seems to me that you apply your words as an artist would put them stroke by stroke in order to obtain the right hue, the right shape, to create a lovely picture. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hi Nance...-smile-
arrangements are are a non issue in my poetry collection.
I write to no other form than how I feel. When I "do" established form....I ...ah....have to run for miles afterward.
I'm not as young as I used to be...I'm afraid I'm going to cough up a lung one of these days. So I tend to stay me....-smile-....yes Maam I am. I'm Integrity Painting. I do it all...from oil to watercolor nudes...ahhaha...ah just kidding. I do specialty painting also...murals, faux finishes, European textures. I've always been very good at "specialty"...-smile-...I thank you. love to you...Michael
Comment from Fridayauthor
Causes me to re-read it several times. With each read, i see a little difference. Very nicely done. A most interesting posting indeed.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Causes me to re-read it several times. With each read, i see a little difference. Very nicely done. A most interesting posting indeed.
Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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ah my pleasure...-smile-...appreciate the stop by....love to you. Michael
Comment from kelscottleh
Very beautiful. Brought me back to my school days when I attended a private Lutheran school. Has the whimsical, playfulness of a child... "Cross my heart, hope to die" but then adds the seriousness of faith.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Very beautiful. Brought me back to my school days when I attended a private Lutheran school. Has the whimsical, playfulness of a child... "Cross my heart, hope to die" but then adds the seriousness of faith.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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yes...I thought so also...-smile- ...appreciate you recognizing it. yes...its got a lot a faith in it too. It takes faith to qualify for answered prayer. Cross my heart...hope. love to you. Michael
Comment from Bollie
This is a lovely poem with passionate verses. The first couple of verses rhymed and then suddenly stopped. I'm fairly new to this so that may be the intended style, I simply don't know. However, despite my confusion I think that the poem is beautiful and expresses deep feeling. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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This is a lovely poem with passionate verses. The first couple of verses rhymed and then suddenly stopped. I'm fairly new to this so that may be the intended style, I simply don't know. However, despite my confusion I think that the poem is beautiful and expresses deep feeling. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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-head tilt-......hm.....interesting
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like how you opened and closed this poem with the same stanza only changing the punctuation for meaning. This is very well written and it causes the reviewer to reflect.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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I like how you opened and closed this poem with the same stanza only changing the punctuation for meaning. This is very well written and it causes the reviewer to reflect.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hi Barb....-smile-
well thank you....appreciate your enjoying as well. love to you...Michael
Comment from TAB_that's me
Hi Michael. I haven't come across a poem of yours for a long time.
Savior Christ - our cross my heart hope:)
being loved is the basic necessity of all and we all have it from the Lord.
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hi Michael. I haven't come across a poem of yours for a long time.
Savior Christ - our cross my heart hope:)
being loved is the basic necessity of all and we all have it from the Lord.
Teresa
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hi Teresa.....-smile-
yes Maam....I believe you're right. love to you...Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
Yep, I guess all you can do is cross your heart and hope Michael. Naked or fully clothed, we all need love.
I prefer the former LOL
Yep...nuthin like a holy place, to feel safe and snug...
Always good to read you...a rather divine write.
Sassy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Yep, I guess all you can do is cross your heart and hope Michael. Naked or fully clothed, we all need love.
I prefer the former LOL
Yep...nuthin like a holy place, to feel safe and snug...
Always good to read you...a rather divine write.
Sassy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Hey Sassy...-smile-
hm...well me too. I'd watch you hope all day long if you'd let me...-smile-...ah well thank you Dear...it is sincere. love to you...michael
