Jerry Jing-Jang and Rusty
The dangdest fool notion32 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
A lot of colloquialisms that you have made this poem come to life in the western theam that you set this in, well done and I enjoyed the poem.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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A lot of colloquialisms that you have made this poem come to life in the western theam that you set this in, well done and I enjoyed the poem.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
make shift bed (I think make-shift should be hyphenated)
All truth be told, none of us speaks the Queen's English, probably not even her herself. Language is continuously changing and fluid. This is a cute poem, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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make shift bed (I think make-shift should be hyphenated)
All truth be told, none of us speaks the Queen's English, probably not even her herself. Language is continuously changing and fluid. This is a cute poem, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Thanks. I think you're right about make-shift. I'll fix that right away.
