A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Fire and Ice"Assorted poems of love
23 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
Maybe we need a cold shower after reading your passionate poem. It is clever and will written; the picture is awesome. I'll try to check out Fastdigits writing when I can. Evi
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Maybe we need a cold shower after reading your passionate poem. It is clever and will written; the picture is awesome. I'll try to check out Fastdigits writing when I can. Evi
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Aww Evi, thank you, sweetie, for reading this with no reward! I will make it up to you somehow!!
I appreciate all the time you devote to being a great fan of mine.
Missy
(((HUGS)))
Comment from michaelcahill
I just reviewed his seconds ago, amen to your assessment!!
And wow to the fire you've brewed with your response. This is a perfect response. It's often the case that opposites set the bedroom ablaze. Something about pressure and friction I suspect. Lovely and steaming hot. Is there any other way? mikey
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I just reviewed his seconds ago, amen to your assessment!!
And wow to the fire you've brewed with your response. This is a perfect response. It's often the case that opposites set the bedroom ablaze. Something about pressure and friction I suspect. Lovely and steaming hot. Is there any other way? mikey
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Oh, I love how you worded this review, Mikey...pressure and friction...and no...there is no BETTER way!!! Thanks, hon for the sizzlin review xx!
Missy
Comment from Liberty Justice
Fire and ice. Amazing emotional photo depicting two people with opposite characters. The contrasts are devastating. Two individuals argue and fight over everything. liberty justice
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Fire and ice. Amazing emotional photo depicting two people with opposite characters. The contrasts are devastating. Two individuals argue and fight over everything. liberty justice
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi LJ, thanks hon for the excellent rating you have given me :)
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Missy. This is a romantic piece, but more than that--candid and sensuous, too. Presentation depicts the electricity described in your poem. These are especially good lines:
"When we come together
In anger
Words sear the heart
Or
Freeze the mind"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi Missy. This is a romantic piece, but more than that--candid and sensuous, too. Presentation depicts the electricity described in your poem. These are especially good lines:
"When we come together
In anger
Words sear the heart
Or
Freeze the mind"
Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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~Awww~Marilyn, thank you for picking those lines :) And for the always giving review!!
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
So crazy. I just wrote a poem the other night about fire and ice but haven't posted it yet!
You write great poems of romance:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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So crazy. I just wrote a poem the other night about fire and ice but haven't posted it yet!
You write great poems of romance:)
Teresa
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hey, woman!! Well, let's get that puppy posted!! Thanks for the review and compliment hon. :) Love ya!!
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've never had an interest in poetry; however, I have learned to enjoy the works of others. It seems to me that all these challenges going around do a wonderful job of pushing everyone who participate to reach higher levels. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I've never had an interest in poetry; however, I have learned to enjoy the works of others. It seems to me that all these challenges going around do a wonderful job of pushing everyone who participate to reach higher levels. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Ric...comere let me read you one...:)
Thanks for the lovely review and insight into Ric Myworld!
Hugs
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
I check out his writing all the time, Missy, although he never reciprocates.
Aside from that, it's oft said that opposites attract, and I believe that's true. The problem with relationships where one's personality is the complete antithesis of the other is the relationship burns like an atom bomb--very fast and furious, explosive--but then it's gone, rather than like a candle, which burns slow, steadily, is reliable, and long-lasting.
Good stuff, Missy...
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I check out his writing all the time, Missy, although he never reciprocates.
Aside from that, it's oft said that opposites attract, and I believe that's true. The problem with relationships where one's personality is the complete antithesis of the other is the relationship burns like an atom bomb--very fast and furious, explosive--but then it's gone, rather than like a candle, which burns slow, steadily, is reliable, and long-lasting.
Good stuff, Missy...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I prefer the candle to the atom bomb...but it must sizzle!! Thank you, sugga for this SCORCHIN review :)
I told him how talented you are and that he should fan you...whether he does or not ....
Hugs
Missy
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You're more than welcome, Missy, it's always a pleasure.
Yes, he did in fact fan me just now, and I am about to return the favor.
Thanks a bunch!
~Dean
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Wonderful...xx
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi JUSTAFAN,
This is a really nice poem of love between two complete opposites, and that truly does make for an interesting relationship.
You describe it so well and the presentation is cool.
Great read.
Brenda
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi JUSTAFAN,
This is a really nice poem of love between two complete opposites, and that truly does make for an interesting relationship.
You describe it so well and the presentation is cool.
Great read.
Brenda
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Good morning, Brenda :)
Thanks hon, for this wonderful review!
Missy
Comment from lightink
I love the dualistic nature of this! What an intensity! Full of emotions - positive and negative, and the display very much supports it! Wonderful poem!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I love the dualistic nature of this! What an intensity! Full of emotions - positive and negative, and the display very much supports it! Wonderful poem!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi there, LI, thanks for this awesome review, hon.
Missy
Comment from mfowler
I like these contrast themes in your romance poetry, Missy. You embrace the light and dark of the relationships in imagery powerful, yet simple enough to be carried in a few words. Fire and ice. Perfect. And relationships are things of contrasts, never always happy. Sometimes, as your closing 'waiting' suggests, it's both elements that make the whole, and it's sometimes the dark side that the lover embraces most fully. The construction of your verses is varied and the narrow, economic format really suits the directness of your words and the power you're trying to evoke. My only criticisms here are about grammar and they're simple fixes:
Words sear the heart
Or
Freezes the mind...freeze the mind. The subject of that sentence is 'Words' and you chose 'sear' for the first verb; correct plural verb. The second verb 'freezes' is singular and is still connected to the noun 'words'. Hence you need to plural 'freeze'.
Here you list the metaphor 'match' for three separate things ie touch, kiss, hands. You need 'matches' to equate with the number:
Your touch
Your kiss
Your hands
The match
That sets our
Therefore it would read:
Your touch
Your kiss
Your hands
The matches
That set our
Love ablaze...note the change to a plural verb 'set'.
Forgive my school teacherly explanations. I thought it may help.
Good poem, enjoyed.
Love ablaze
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I like these contrast themes in your romance poetry, Missy. You embrace the light and dark of the relationships in imagery powerful, yet simple enough to be carried in a few words. Fire and ice. Perfect. And relationships are things of contrasts, never always happy. Sometimes, as your closing 'waiting' suggests, it's both elements that make the whole, and it's sometimes the dark side that the lover embraces most fully. The construction of your verses is varied and the narrow, economic format really suits the directness of your words and the power you're trying to evoke. My only criticisms here are about grammar and they're simple fixes:
Words sear the heart
Or
Freezes the mind...freeze the mind. The subject of that sentence is 'Words' and you chose 'sear' for the first verb; correct plural verb. The second verb 'freezes' is singular and is still connected to the noun 'words'. Hence you need to plural 'freeze'.
Here you list the metaphor 'match' for three separate things ie touch, kiss, hands. You need 'matches' to equate with the number:
Your touch
Your kiss
Your hands
The match
That sets our
Therefore it would read:
Your touch
Your kiss
Your hands
The matches
That set our
Love ablaze...note the change to a plural verb 'set'.
Forgive my school teacherly explanations. I thought it may help.
Good poem, enjoyed.
Love ablaze
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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You know how much I depend on your "school teacherly" explanations :) Your writing skills I admire so much. So, thank you for again, coming to my rescue :)
Missy
