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Freestyle musings77 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Impressive style and content. Well done! I follow your thread of thought and tend to nod yes to every section, so I assume we're in agreement. ;)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Impressive style and content. Well done! I follow your thread of thought and tend to nod yes to every section, so I assume we're in agreement. ;)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hi, Phyllis
I'm glad my thoughts resonated with your own. There's power in numbers!
Your support and encouragement are much appreciated.
:) Bev
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well done, Bev. Your musings should give rise to some thoughtful pondering. In my heart I hope that people who are vacillating on the question pause to think about it a little more positively. There is no place for hatred in the Christian's heart. There should be none in anyone's.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Well done, Bev. Your musings should give rise to some thoughtful pondering. In my heart I hope that people who are vacillating on the question pause to think about it a little more positively. There is no place for hatred in the Christian's heart. There should be none in anyone's.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Oh, Giddy, I so agree with you. We have so little time as it is. But I suppose when you are young and feel invincible, hatred finds a place in your heart.
Thank you for reading my post and for sharing your helpful insights.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from Javed05
This is a thoughtful poem. I like the style of this poem.Author has chosen words well, and having fitted them into this form they work well to express Important points. Thanks
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
This is a thoughtful poem. I like the style of this poem.Author has chosen words well, and having fitted them into this form they work well to express Important points. Thanks
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hi, Javed05
Thank you for taking time to read my post. I appreciate your kind review and encouragement.
:) Bev
Comment from Joan E.
I was pleased to see your post on this holiday weekend focused on rebirth for many. I admired your musings--thoughts almost in opposition. Thank you for sharing your visually appealing and thought provoking, freestyle creation. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
I was pleased to see your post on this holiday weekend focused on rebirth for many. I admired your musings--thoughts almost in opposition. Thank you for sharing your visually appealing and thought provoking, freestyle creation. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hi, Joan
Thank you very much for your kind words and encouragement. I'm glad you found it 'thought-provoking'. I seem to naturally gravitate to the freestyle even if it's not always popular.
Hope you enjoy your Easter Sunday!
Hugs, Bev
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Popular, smopular! Here's to a satisfying Easter weekend- Joan
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hehehe
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I am glad my sense of humor is never lost on you! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Joy Graham
Nice free verse, Bev :) I'm taking notes in preparation for this week's potlatch poetry challenge.It's to be free verse. I suck big time at free verse :( Hope you'll join us. The info will be released in the forums in the poetry discussion section.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Nice free verse, Bev :) I'm taking notes in preparation for this week's potlatch poetry challenge.It's to be free verse. I suck big time at free verse :( Hope you'll join us. The info will be released in the forums in the poetry discussion section.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Thanks a lot, Joy. Hey, I appreciate the heads up. I'll keep my eyes peeled as they say. :)
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Thanks a lot, Joy. Hey, I appreciate the heads up. I'll keep my eyes peeled as they say. :)
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi to you,
I am not well up on the form of poetry but I found this one interesting. Having the whole poem laid out in couplets helped to digest each section and appreciate your writing.
I don't agree with all, but was interesting.
Brenda
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Hi to you,
I am not well up on the form of poetry but I found this one interesting. Having the whole poem laid out in couplets helped to digest each section and appreciate your writing.
I don't agree with all, but was interesting.
Brenda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brenda. I appreciate your right to feel differently.
:) Bev
Comment from royowen
And I do believe scientists are not sure why the cell doesn't do it less perfectly each time, hence aging. There's lots of speculation and mystery in creation, (I have lots of conclusions I have pondered, (with God's help!) but well pondered Bev, well done, neatly arranged and written, have you considered endless space? Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
And I do believe scientists are not sure why the cell doesn't do it less perfectly each time, hence aging. There's lots of speculation and mystery in creation, (I have lots of conclusions I have pondered, (with God's help!) but well pondered Bev, well done, neatly arranged and written, have you considered endless space? Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hi, Roy
I have considered endless space and wonder if sometime down the road we'll acknowledge that it's all unformed intention. As to aging, I think perhaps the cells are responding to the brain's imperative/expectation.
I really appreciate your very kind and generous review, my friend.
Happy Easter to you and yours.
:) Bev
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Well done Bev,
Comment from LIJ Red
As if so easily rots into what if. The old saw says the duck has to retrain
himself each morning. Unless we stop evolution and conquer the universe,
we adapt or die. Is that what you mean? interesting free verse.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
As if so easily rots into what if. The old saw says the duck has to retrain
himself each morning. Unless we stop evolution and conquer the universe,
we adapt or die. Is that what you mean? interesting free verse.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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I think I mean whatever you feel it means, L.
Appreciate your review and insights...
:) Bev
Comment from Senyai
Hi, Writingfundamension. I loved your format of this work. As if.. as if... very powerful indeed. The single cell is an absolute wonder is it not? I find your work here almost a tribute to the unbiased beauty of life itself.
Well done.
Have a great weekend.
Senyai
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Hi, Writingfundamension. I loved your format of this work. As if.. as if... very powerful indeed. The single cell is an absolute wonder is it not? I find your work here almost a tribute to the unbiased beauty of life itself.
Well done.
Have a great weekend.
Senyai
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hi, Senyai
Thank you for your wonderful review. I appreciate the support, encouragement and shared insights -- 'unbiased beauty of life...'--
how perfect!
Have a great weekend as well.
:) Bev
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Great thoughts. Enjoyed it and look forward to more, Bev.
Senyai
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Thanks again!
Comment from koolaid228
Very interesting style that you are writing in, I like it, a very informative type style
with a message to humanity, very well written, thank you for sharing. koolaid228
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
Very interesting style that you are writing in, I like it, a very informative type style
with a message to humanity, very well written, thank you for sharing. koolaid228
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Thanks, koolaid228. I sure appreciate your kind and generous review.
:) Bev