Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Impressive style and content. Well done! I follow your thread of thought and tend to nod yes to every section, so I assume we're in agreement. ;)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi, Phyllis

I'm glad my thoughts resonated with your own. There's power in numbers!

Your support and encouragement are much appreciated.

:) Bev

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Well done, Bev. Your musings should give rise to some thoughtful pondering. In my heart I hope that people who are vacillating on the question pause to think about it a little more positively. There is no place for hatred in the Christian's heart. There should be none in anyone's.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Oh, Giddy, I so agree with you. We have so little time as it is. But I suppose when you are young and feel invincible, hatred finds a place in your heart.

Thank you for reading my post and for sharing your helpful insights.

Hugs, Bev

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

This is a thoughtful poem. I like the style of this poem.Author has chosen words well, and having fitted them into this form they work well to express Important points. Thanks

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi, Javed05

Thank you for taking time to read my post. I appreciate your kind review and encouragement.

:) Bev

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I was pleased to see your post on this holiday weekend focused on rebirth for many. I admired your musings--thoughts almost in opposition. Thank you for sharing your visually appealing and thought provoking, freestyle creation. Hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi, Joan

Thank you very much for your kind words and encouragement. I'm glad you found it 'thought-provoking'. I seem to naturally gravitate to the freestyle even if it's not always popular.

Hope you enjoy your Easter Sunday!

Hugs, Bev

reply by Joan E. on 26-Mar-2016

Popular, smopular! Here's to a satisfying Easter weekend- Joan

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

hehehe

reply by Joan E. on 26-Mar-2016

I am glad my sense of humor is never lost on you! Smiles- Joan

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Nice free verse, Bev :) I'm taking notes in preparation for this week's potlatch poetry challenge.It's to be free verse. I suck big time at free verse :( Hope you'll join us. The info will be released in the forums in the poetry discussion section.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thanks a lot, Joy. Hey, I appreciate the heads up. I'll keep my eyes peeled as they say. :)

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thanks a lot, Joy. Hey, I appreciate the heads up. I'll keep my eyes peeled as they say. :)

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi to you,
I am not well up on the form of poetry but I found this one interesting. Having the whole poem laid out in couplets helped to digest each section and appreciate your writing.
I don't agree with all, but was interesting.
Brenda

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brenda. I appreciate your right to feel differently.

:) Bev

Comment from royowen

Excellent

And I do believe scientists are not sure why the cell doesn't do it less perfectly each time, hence aging. There's lots of speculation and mystery in creation, (I have lots of conclusions I have pondered, (with God's help!) but well pondered Bev, well done, neatly arranged and written, have you considered endless space? Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi, Roy

I have considered endless space and wonder if sometime down the road we'll acknowledge that it's all unformed intention. As to aging, I think perhaps the cells are responding to the brain's imperative/expectation.

I really appreciate your very kind and generous review, my friend.

Happy Easter to you and yours.

:) Bev

reply by royowen on 26-Mar-2016

Well done Bev,

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

As if so easily rots into what if. The old saw says the duck has to retrain
himself each morning. Unless we stop evolution and conquer the universe,
we adapt or die. Is that what you mean? interesting free verse.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

I think I mean whatever you feel it means, L.

Appreciate your review and insights...

:) Bev

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi, Writingfundamension. I loved your format of this work. As if.. as if... very powerful indeed. The single cell is an absolute wonder is it not? I find your work here almost a tribute to the unbiased beauty of life itself.

Well done.

Have a great weekend.

Senyai

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi, Senyai

Thank you for your wonderful review. I appreciate the support, encouragement and shared insights -- 'unbiased beauty of life...'--
how perfect!

Have a great weekend as well.

:) Bev

reply by Senyai on 26-Mar-2016

Great thoughts. Enjoyed it and look forward to more, Bev.

Senyai

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thanks again!

Comment from koolaid228

Excellent

Very interesting style that you are writing in, I like it, a very informative type style
with a message to humanity, very well written, thank you for sharing. koolaid228

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thanks, koolaid228. I sure appreciate your kind and generous review.

:) Bev