To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Shaded Differently"Poems by Michael
17 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hello Michael,
Though I am not as familiar with jazz music and performers
as you, I love the theme of this "Shaded Differently" ; with
the most intriguing music vid included. Brings more depth
and feeling to your eclectically presented verse, enhancing
gorgeous picture all the more. You have unique musical taste; Hope you do more like this.
this was most enjoyable read and listening.
Always, Ronni
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Hello Michael,
Though I am not as familiar with jazz music and performers
as you, I love the theme of this "Shaded Differently" ; with
the most intriguing music vid included. Brings more depth
and feeling to your eclectically presented verse, enhancing
gorgeous picture all the more. You have unique musical taste; Hope you do more like this.
this was most enjoyable read and listening.
Always, Ronni
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Good morning...,smile....me either really, just found it and went there.. Well if it tastes good to you I must of mixed it right. Thanks....smile. Love michael
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the way the picture you selected resonated with the first stanza and its repeat at the end. Your weaving in sound and music is very effective. Happy Sunday and the beginning of Spring- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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I liked the way the picture you selected resonated with the first stanza and its repeat at the end. Your weaving in sound and music is very effective. Happy Sunday and the beginning of Spring- Joan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Hey j ....smile....thank you. You too happy everything. Love michael
Comment from Nika2016
Butterflies and Coltrane..waterfalls and Miles Davis....Heaven?......You chose a fine piece of music for this one....The lady should be honored. Hopefully, she hears your message.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Butterflies and Coltrane..waterfalls and Miles Davis....Heaven?......You chose a fine piece of music for this one....The lady should be honored. Hopefully, she hears your message.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Maybe....today. If not I' bet life on tomorrow. ...smile....thank you for stopping by. Love michael
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Midnight..beautiful
music..on both
posts
Comment from MariMc
This one is easy to praise -- great jazzy riffs, with Coltrane and Miles for company . It doesn't get much better than that. The imagery works all the way through. "essence shadowed in song" is a great line.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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This one is easy to praise -- great jazzy riffs, with Coltrane and Miles for company . It doesn't get much better than that. The imagery works all the way through. "essence shadowed in song" is a great line.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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ha...well thank you. -smile- appreciate the say so....love michael
Comment from tfawcus
I rarely play the soundtracks, but this one is a real beauty. With it in the background, your poem in the foreground and nascent dawn tinged soft coral grey - what a way to start Sunday morning. Your lines have the delicate softness of the piano backing, each falling like a drop of nectar on the subconscious. "mystery your way butterflies", "swoon does the swan beautiful", "essence shadowed in song". Wow! Makes me glad to be alive.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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I rarely play the soundtracks, but this one is a real beauty. With it in the background, your poem in the foreground and nascent dawn tinged soft coral grey - what a way to start Sunday morning. Your lines have the delicate softness of the piano backing, each falling like a drop of nectar on the subconscious. "mystery your way butterflies", "swoon does the swan beautiful", "essence shadowed in song". Wow! Makes me glad to be alive.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Hey T...-smile-....thanks man. its good to go someplace soothing. love Michael
Comment from Brewster
Congrats! Yeah, the music and the poem are boss! I don't know if you meant for me to play the music while I read the poem but I did and it boost it to a six star work! In dept very nice love for a lady with blue eyes I think! ******stars. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Congrats! Yeah, the music and the poem are boss! I don't know if you meant for me to play the music while I read the poem but I did and it boost it to a six star work! In dept very nice love for a lady with blue eyes I think! ******stars. Keep writing!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Always play the music.....even if it hurts. For the dead hear no sound except silence. Always play the music....smile...appreciate you're review. Love michael
Comment from Ricky1024
Ran out of 6s but well worth it. Nice theme and imagery Michael.
I loved this and based on Objective as well as Adjective...
'Contents...
And on s scale of 1-100. A solid 100!
Thanks For this!
Ricky 1024.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Ran out of 6s but well worth it. Nice theme and imagery Michael.
I loved this and based on Objective as well as Adjective...
'Contents...
And on s scale of 1-100. A solid 100!
Thanks For this!
Ricky 1024.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Hey Rick...-smile-...appreciate you man.
hope everything's going your way. love michael
