Comment from Lannell912

Excellent

I have not learned yet how to make something so short so powerful . Nail It I will be working on this part of the art form your friend LANNELL912 [PRA4ME]

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016

Thank you for the five stars and the comment. I learned that the last line of a haiku sums up or you might say the first two lines.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. It is a great contest entry. Good job with the syllable count. The picture is awesome.

Good job and best wishes in the contest.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment.

Comment from pmait

Excellent

Yes they are awesome, and like many delights of life you cannot plan them, only just enjoy the moment God has blessed you with one. In my opinion you should remove the comma after "awe." Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment.

Comment from Jose Saic

Exceptional

Beautiful 7-5-7 poem in which the nature beauty of a rainbow is expressed in few verses:
the view of an optical phenomenon
Congratulations.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment about the verses expressing the beauty of the rainbow.

reply by Jose Saic on 30-Mar-2016

You are welcome. Excellent poem.

Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

A lovely 5-7-5 poem. I love the 2nd verse ,"an optical phenomena" The
picture accompanies the poem so nicely. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment. I saw you "-na" and I checked it out and this is what I found
"-on" is singular and -na" is plural. I think my haiku referred to " a rainbow."
But nevertheless thanks a lot for reviewing my poem.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I love the inspired and original phrase, 'optical phenomenon' to describe this unique site of a rainbow.

To avoid the repetition of 'see' and 'optical', maybe:

'awe is to witness'

Nice one.

Best wishes, Ray.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars, best wishes and comment. "Awe" is to give reverence to the majestic beauty of God and "optical iI meant is #l. Thanks for wanting to help, that is what reviewing is all about.
adj
1. (General Physics) of, relating to, producing, or involving light

2. (Medicine) of or relating to the eye or to the sense of sight; optic

3. (Medicine) (esp of a lens) aiding vision or correcting a visual disorder

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing the "optical phenomenon" is both your words and with CammyCards' artwork. Here's to rainbows! Best wishes in the 5-7-5 contest- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment of wishing me the best. A rainbow is so beautiful to look at.

Comment from ndadarose

Excellent

I love how you describe a rainbow "an optical phenomenon" and that's why the five. And yes I am always in a state of awe when I see a rainbow. You also adhered to the 5-7-5 format.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment. A rainbow is beautiful, they just suddenly appear.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Meets requirements as far as I can tell. Rainbows are amazing. Various colors blending into the eon of existence. Well done poet. Best to you.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment, I am glad you reviewed my haiku.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Wow what an amazing picture that really complements the poetry nicely. I found this piece about the rainbow to be an excellent contest entry for the 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest and thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment, I am glad you enjoyed it.