Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Artisart4U
Whenever I see a rainbow, I picture Noah letting the animals out of the ark. It's a sign from God, a reminder if you will. It's a beautiful sight each and every time I see one. I gawk, mesmerized. And I'm no spring chicken!
I have three suggestions for you.
The last line,
"Rainbow, in the sky" ... where else would it be? "in the sky" is redundant. There are three syllables that you could put to better use. I suggest,
ravishing rainbow, or something like that.
Also, I wouldn't use capitals, and there's no need of those commas either.
Good Luck in the contest!
cheers
Kimbob

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thanks for the stars and comment. Take and read it again.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I would agree that rainbows are awesome. We don't get the huge ones too often, those that stretch across the sky. But even the small ones are an "optical phenomenon."

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thanks for the five stars and comment.

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Seventeen syllables that poetically
and enthusiastically describe the
beauty of the mirage in the open
sky, the rainbow.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank your for the five stars and comment about the mirage, it is a beautiful sight to see.

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Good luck with your contest entry; three little lines have summed up the covenant that god made with man. He made the rainbow and promised never to flood the land like He did in the times of Noah. Beautiful my friend. Happy Easter!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and nice comment. My family is coming to eat Easter dinner with me. The kids
like looking for hidden Easter eggs.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The one who put it there is awesome also, but it's great to look at the wonders of creation and know how wonderful it reall is. As is your wonderful 5/7/5 poetic entry, inventive and original, so many great entries in the contest, good luck on yours! Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and wonderful comment about "the one who put it there is awesome."

reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2016

My pleasure,

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

'Optical phenomenon" is a great word pairing. The sounds go so well together. Rainbows do indeed inspire awe and it is not surprising that there is so much folklore attached to them. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thanks for the five stars and comment. Optical phenomenon came from scijink.

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Such a pretty image
both visually and mentally
It truly is a phenomenon.
Not sure I like ending a line with an
but otherwise I love it

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thanks for your five stars and comment. Your fourth line "... ending a line with an," I am not sure what you meant, can you explain it to me. Nevertheless, thanks such much for reviewing it.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

One has received a blessing when he is able to see a miracle of God full on display in the heavens. We should treasure each occurrence as it takes place. Some may never be so blessed and that is a shame. Even worse is that some will witness and take for granted such a sight and assign no honor to it. Shame on these ones.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thanks for the five stars and inspiring comment.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I love rainbows. Always reminding me of God's promise. They truly are an Optical phenomenon. Very nicely done with a beautiful picture to match. Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A well written 5-7-5 poem. The rainbow is always beautiful to look at. The colorful bow in the sky make us always stare in awe.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment.