Little Poems
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Comment from Mary Wakeford
This is a difficult execution based on your explanation, but you have nailed it delightfully. I can just picture the scene as you described it with a poet's charm and vitality of the nauticals at work. I could be wrong, but I believe you whither should be wither, as in shrink or melt. That would be my only suggestion for change. Well done.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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This is a difficult execution based on your explanation, but you have nailed it delightfully. I can just picture the scene as you described it with a poet's charm and vitality of the nauticals at work. I could be wrong, but I believe you whither should be wither, as in shrink or melt. That would be my only suggestion for change. Well done.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you Mary, I believe you are right,
